|Reviews for Untied Shoelaces|
| ejm12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Please continue! its super good!
| Serpent91 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Well done. Good start
| blood wolfe 92 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Great story! keep going, i wanna know more!
| iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
me like it!
| Nymphadora Potter chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
You ought to continue this as a story, it's quite good!
| KIRA FIRE WOLF chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Nice I like please continue
| Madam'zelleGiry chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Overall, I enjoyed this. But some of your Remus dialogue seemed a bit out of character. You might want to consider revising but it is up to you.
But your storyline was quite good.