Reviews for Untied Shoelaces
ejm12 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Please continue! its super good!
Serpent91 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Well done. Good start
blood wolfe 92 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Great story! keep going, i wanna know more!
iloveme5895 chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
me like it!

Nymphadora Potter chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
You ought to continue this as a story, it's quite good!
KIRA FIRE WOLF chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Nice I like please continue
Madam'zelleG chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Overall, I enjoyed this. But some of your Remus dialogue seemed a bit out of character. You might want to consider revising but it is up to you.

But your storyline was quite good.