Reviews for Sibling Rivalry
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2016
i really like the fleshy appendages protruding from my palm so yeah
Guest chapter 4 . 4/5/2016
Good job! I loved little lily! She is so cute!
What chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
It makes me not want to review. When yourre being mean
Whale Saver Zip chapter 4 . 8/3/2015
Guest chapter 4 . 3/23/2015
I love it
Guest chapter 4 . 3/14/2015
Love it so much! Keep writing!
AvidReader2236 chapter 4 . 12/8/2014
I'm glad we saw some of Teddy in this chapter, as I imagine he would be like a sibling to all of the Potters. Again, well done with the realism in regard to Quidditch arguments.
AvidReader2236 chapter 3 . 12/8/2014
The prank was perfectly well written; childlike. Good job!
AvidReader2236 chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
I loved how you worded Harry's advice at the end.
AvidReader2236 chapter 1 . 12/8/2014
I think Quidditch is something that the Potter kids would fight over- so well done on the realism front.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2014
Hurry up and update.
Heliey chapter 4 . 11/4/2014
Ok that is NOT funny when you call your readers al those names. It's mean. But your story is AMAZZINGGG so I'll let it go.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/4/2014
Update. I hate when authors stop without any reason. But great start.
ballet fairy chapter 4 . 10/4/2014
Parenting done right
FigurativelyDying chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
Ok that was a little unfair too both James and Albus. Lily was being too cocky. I also think Albus should be a little more smarter, but that's just me. I loved this fanfic though and your writing was superb! Update soon please.
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