|Reviews for With Science|
| sonicthehedgehog240 chapter 1 . 6/2
I say Bubblegum has always been the jealous type when it comes to someone else's relationship. Seriously though, good job.
| Lilymoose chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
This is nice, I like it. :)
| elf maiden cyd chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I like it. A little dramatic maybe, but it's good. I would write more, cause I LOVE "Adventure Time with Finn and Jake." Plus, I'm curious to see what happens with Ice King and his feelings.
| jj chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
I liked it. Is it Princess bubblegum who's talking? If it is I would freak!
| Psychid chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
Though I don't support Princess BubblegumxIce King, I promise you that my head didn't "explode with rage" as I read this. ;D
Even though I don't support that relationship, I have still enjoyed this story nonetheless. However, one word of critique: I thought this story was a bit too short. Nothing personal, but I prefer stories/chapters that are a fair amount of length (like two thousand words, at the least). HELPFUL TIP: a story/chapter that has a fair amount of length, but not TOO fair a length, is an interesting story to read, indeed.
This is all a CRITIQUE. NOT a FLAME. Just wanted to let you know. ;D
Nice job, though! )
| The Butter chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
or perhaps she feels jealous because the ice king is getting married before her. that would definitely be more probable than her being jealous of the ice kings fiance.