|Reviews for Ellipsis|
| thunnababy chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Two thoughts about this chapter. The first being that she really threw herself at him, begging him to make love to him, telling him she loved him while he was backing off, trying to leave. How much can a young guy take when a beautiful girl is throwing herself at him?
The second being that he did, in the end, tell her he was insanely in love with her and they should have been together long ago, so he has me stupified. Did he love her? Were his feelings genuine or were they the result of the afterglow of sex? This outtake doesn't tell me he was the bad guy/user here. I lay that on Bella.
| wonderfullybedazzled chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
He did love her. But the Victoria issue...bet the letters Jessica will send Bella are from Riley.
| xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This was seriously awesome! So very hot and I loved it! The story of her waiting and finally getting the guy and him loving her this entire time is so heartbreakingly beautiful! This was so sweet and I enjoyed reading it!
| mpg chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
I'm such a B&E girl, this was difficult to read - at least in episode its all mixed up within the B&E love story. That said it was really well written & I can totally see why Bella is so hooked on Riley
| ENAddict chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Really enjoyed it and it's made me even more curious about the reasons behind Riley sticking with Victoria. I had assumed it was linked to her father/his job, but he references wanting her for a long time! C x
| sparkledamnu chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I have mixed emotions after reading this.
First. As a stand alone this is one hot oneshot. The tension and sexual awareness is there. He appears very loving and caring of Bella. And Bella is just so totally obsessed with Riley. I also wonder if maybe she is confused with obsession and true love. But anywho. This was very well written and as I said a good stand alone.
But knowing the end of these two makes me hate the shit out of Riley. I want to get into his mind. Was he truly in love with Bella and using Victoria for whatever she and her family could bring to him? Or did he believe Bella was the sure virgin fuck that could continue as long as he kept her hidden from the world and Victoria? Doesn't really matter. He took advantage of an obsessed younger Bella.
Either way doesn't change my thoughts. To quote Ali in Remember Me - he's simply an assaholic.
Now back to chapter 19 of Episode. See ya over there!
Elaine - sparkledamnu on twitter
| slc6548 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
| WellTrue chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
ok give me some bleach to wash my eyes, so i can not see the words i have just dinner is definately trying to resurface. love your writing and all that but did i really have to read that before the next chapter of Episode?
thing is i think riley may really like bella over victoria but not enough to give up everything for her,which is really worrying for edward as its obvious riley is going to reappear,and i hope when he does, that bella has a clear head and realises that edward is her soul mate and that riley was just infatuation. oxo
| Themys chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
It was fun to read the state of mind of Bella, in this outtake. All the passion and the need. It's breathtaking!
Thanks for sharing this amazing story.
Cheers from Brazil
| 84gemstone chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Ok so I locked myself in the loo at work to read this lol Bella you won't be with Riley for long hub your true love (Edward) is waiting for you (well he is now lol) great outtake him :0)
| TheRugbymom chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
| Analitica chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
i loved it
| TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I can definitely see how her crush was seen as an obsession. She had it bad for him, and we all know how he used her. Thanks, this put alot into perspective. ;)
| SecondMoon chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Nice story. its was rlly good. ]
| Ivy The Vamp chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
this was really good! Love Riley/Bella pair! )