Reviews for The Battle of Hi City
WishingDreamer5 chapter 2 . 12/2/2010
This is your only story that isn't against the rules of . I reported all the other ones. Just one sidenote. Please make the chapters longer than 150 words, otherwise there no room for character development. Make them at least 1000 words if you really can't make long chapters...unless these are all drabbles, which I highly doubt now.