I was hoping for a great story, and I got it in spades. But no ending except for a cliff-hanger, what gives? Please come back and finish this story, please!

Pretty decent story. Too bad updates quit being made.

Such a great story with no ending sad. dunno, i think it was just as good as "what fate imposes".

Hey, nice start... good backstory... but then Vigilante Chuck... first few chapters chuck felt OOC, still he was closer to the character that this background might lead to... then, to put him in character... under the mask it was just the canon Chuck, but very successful and a somewhat more brave, oh and kicker, No Training... talk about head spinner... but the most illogical part... a ex Super Spy, a Super Genius Ghost, lastly and most importantly, a master strategist... and this they came up with... sneak through the front door...a 6ft 8 super gorilla... and then let the guy with no training decided to wrestle that Super gorilla... though Team Orion have the toys... but they are just playing softball with an organisation that broke one of their teammates back and have the Bartowski matriarch... Bravo... I don't even want to talk abt how stupid Chuck acts for a billionaire... A billionaire... not a nerd herder... Thought will let you know, despite you have done good job in developing Sarah according to her changed background... Chuck really doesn't seem different at all

I'm starting to get annoyed. Again a great story, which isn't finished, there are so few great story's and reading only the first chapter, I already really liked this story.

Ah come on! You got to finish this...please...

Saddens me that this story was abandoned, it was a great read. However unlikely it might be, I really hope you find the time to finish it some day.

Man total bummer when I realized this story was abandoned. Hope you come back someday to finish it, even though that's very unlikely.

Just a couple observations so far. First I think Chuck would have had more of a reaction when he first saw his dad again during the flashback either this or last chapter. And I'm pretty sure he would have been pissed at Bryce and Jill because they met his dad and never told him.

Second is when you had Sarah shoot the guy in the face so she wouldn't have to see his face as he died, you made it sound like the bullet makes their face explode or something. An exit wound would take a chunk out so given a big enough caliber to break through the skull on the other side, it would leave damage to the back of the head, but the entry wound would be small, just as big as the bullet.

It is a good story!
You haven't updated it in a while so, i think you have given up on this story. Which is sad as, the upcoming plot could have been more interesting!
I hope that you will write a new chapter and give something to read to Chuck fans.

I'm so sad that this fanfic isn't finished. I'm new to the fanfic world and it was just the second fanfic I read and I didn't see that it wasn't complete. I'm so sad right now. This story was amazing and with so much details ! Just awesome ! And of course it's the last chapter that has a cliffhanger at the end, that's cruel XD

Awesome chapter!

and the next chapter never came. this is the danger of writing chapter by chapter, it is best to have the entire story outlined at the very least or better yet written before you ever publish the first chapter. abandoned stories hurt everyone here. they hurt the reader, because they might have liked the story, and are left with an unfinished work; the website, because it takes up space; and most of all, it hurts the author, because most are fiction readers, and they know the feeling to get involved with a story only to see it never finished.

A really good story, too bad it never got finished.

Whaaaaaa where the next chapter?!