and this is why the complex should have lasted longer!

I loved it D

That was ridiculously funny when Holly was praying 'oh Frond' and all. XD

*dies laughing*

XD,

brittney

Silly Holly, you love Arty more than life, your career is nothing.

interesting... Have you heard the book excerpt released on youtube yet? Eoin read it himself.

AS for your story, I've read better. But yours shows skill none the less.

Damn... THIS IS GREAT!

I feel sorry for Holly, bad timing from Artimis and that, and how would she relpy? My answer would be a heavy object on his head at alarming speeds.

Write another if it isn't a one-shot!

PLEASE!

-burst into laughter- It's still funny the second time around. -laughter subsides- Ah. Sorry I didn't review earlier. Would have been the first, but I wasn't in a reviewing mood last night. -stares at Kit- Only 3 people? Seriously? -looks at you- Join. Please. For her sanity, join.

Oh, um, I can't remember for sure but, is Holly actually a major in TAC? I'm pretty sure they called her Captain in the first chapter...you did read that right? Anyway! Very funny. I liked it. Good job. _~

Very interesting. I liked it

Haha! That was kind of funny. You should enter this in The Big Reveal contest that Kitsune Heart's doing! I bet it'd win something!

*AI :)

Oh! Oh! -raises hands, points to own story, "Things Best Left Unsaid"- Want to join my story competition? This qualifies. It's basically people writing the different ways Artemis could confess. If you want it in the competition, I'll add it. Only 3 other entries, so far. Winner gets it read as a podfic!

In other news, good. Liked it. Please enter...please...