Reviews for What Comes Before the Fall
Mikkeneko chapter 2 . 11/6/2010
This is an interesting story, but I feel it might be better suited in the RG Veda category than the Tsubasa category, at least so far.
kenarbes chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
You want CLAMP characters? How about the guys from Legal Drug? Saiga and Kakei, and Rikou and Kazahaya.

About the story, it's kind of unusual to start a story off with an Interlude. Prologue, yes, Interlude, tho? The story hasn't even really started, so it's kind of hard to submit a review, especially as you haven't introduced the main characters (unless Princess Shashi is going to be one of the main characters).

As for grammar problems, didn't spot any.