Reviews for Observations and Realizations
Pentastic chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
This is great. I like Mai Asa character. I just don't like her with Zuko. She doesn't want the life of nobility and Zuko needs someone to lighten him up, not collude with in darkness. I am glad you gave her the backbone not to be second to anyone and the agency to find her own happiness.
N chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
This is an elegant, well-told story with a Mai I can support. She so often gets short shrift that your treatment is even more appreciated. Great job!
SparklyLarry chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
It's pretty short but really nice and touching))
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
An excellent glimpse into Mai's character; this is indeed how she'd react to Zutara!
LyricGirl16 chapter 1 . 7/11/2010

Overall, I really liked the story. You showed what was going on despite still being able to make it an introspective-ish piece.

Just to mention it, though, I think the piece would have had a stronger ending if you tied it up like the summary. Y'know, instead of saying that she would never be any less, you could bring back in the footnote idea. (I just like the idea of footnotes. It's such a great word for symbolism...) :D

So yeah, I really liked it, and that last bit is just food for thought.

Jasmine Dragon chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
Awesome story. Loved the honour bit. Keep writing :)
eachpeach chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
really nice

interesting side to mai

left me wanting more
Aussie-Muggle chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
It's nice to see a Zutara fan fic that doesn't bag the hell out of my favourite character. She's not clingy.

Nice one.