Reviews for Bullet and Blood
IluthraDanar chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I liked this short piece. I guess because I use imagery myself in some stories, I had no trouble reading and following along. And having just seen this episode not so long ago, I knew the context.

"I balled up the memories and spat them out with Bennet's useless projectile.."

I liked this line. :-)

Good job!
Gamebird chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Well... it's been a while since I watched that episode, so without context I'm kind of lost. Yes, I remember Noah cutting his throat, so that part makes since, but I'm not sure who is speaking to Sylar here and why/when/who he lit on fire. Does he even have a power that summons fire? I don't think so. Who is it he has to be so careful with? All these questions...

As for the writing, I like the word choice and the narrative. Your spelling is fine (no errors) but for grammar I wouldn't start so many sentences with "And," unless you're trying to make a point with parallel construction or something esoteric like that.

In general, well written, but needs some context to orient the reader.