Reviews for Timeline
guestme chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
i love them tooo..the story is so cute..sad thing its only a one shot..i was craving for more..i really like the way you write them..soooo lovely..thanks for sharing this..and more CLOTI please..
sasuke's duck butt hair chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
I really, really, REALLY liked this :D You're a very good writer. Well done!
alchemic-rose chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
MajorasMask02 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Beautiful :D

hey pretty good idea that scene with the mud its a shame that in FF Advent Children they didnt kiss or at least say that they love each other(cause they do),anyway awesome oneshot i hope to see more of you in the future :D
PastelSweet chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Aww, cute! I loved this, especially the young Cloud and the mud, that was cute. Good work :)
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
awwwww finally all that bottle up emotion out like an explosion! good job cloud!