|Reviews for The Story of Bella and Jasper|
| Mehwrites chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Aw, that was a good story, but it kind of bummed me out.
| catcammug chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
So sad! But it was good!
| macienamarie chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
this is wonderful...its a mix bowl of happy and sad and beautiful...
congrats on a great one shot
| gredelina1 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
What? I was so not prepared for that! Such a beautiful story with such a powerful feeling of love radiating from every line and then you kill Jasper? I'm actually crying right now and I've got a serious case of heartache. I both love you and hate you right now...;)
| Ved and Cloe4eva chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
awww that is sooooooooo sad. :(
| omnomsoup chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Awww. :) It's such a sad ending, yet happy at the same time. I like it.
| Muffin-DanishFreak chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Aww! This story is so sweet! I love it. This is one of the few Jasper/Bella stories I have read but it is THE BEST! I love your stories! :D Your a great writer!
| christag banner chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
:O :( How very sad.
| Di Michelle chapter 1 . 7/2/2010
I want to cry now! Awesome story though.
| Surfer girly 22 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
so wait jasper dies awwww thats soooooooo sad *cries*
| oOPriOo chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
would u believe me if i said i cried?
this was so sweet and awesome and well amazing
| sprazinko chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
That was really good
| lemonbutt chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
THis made me cry soo bad. beautifully written. one chapter closes and another opens. its sad to think that jasper won't be in his child's life physically.
| Lansara chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Damn! A tissue alert would have been nice. You know you're a good writer when you can take your readers from embarrassed to laughing to horny as hell to crying all in one page. Good job. Thank you.
| timidvampire chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
noooooooooo, how could you do that to them? this was beautiful, and sad , and nooooooooooooooooo...I can not believe you just did that...