|Reviews for Bella Gomez|
| k1942 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Despite the convoluted plot, I managed to keep track of all the characters threads, hung in there and finished the story. Sorry to say, I hated what happened, it just seemed so mean to blow up the house and wipe their memories again. It must be me, I liked all the rest of your stuff that I've read.
| justluey chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Ummm, okay. so did Bella and Edward blow up the house to stay together? but the whole family loved her, so why couldn't they stay together...or did they do it so that everyone would survive and the volturi wouldn't come after them.
sorry, it was well written, but im confused...
| AJ04-Jtrs98 chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
Wow that was such a twist...I am in awe of Bella's gift. I am saddened that Bella and Edward had to leave the Cullens but it seemed like it was for the best...well done honey
| DELETEACCOUNTPLEASETHANKS chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
awe! :( the ending is so sad... :'( will they ever see each other again? i hope they do cause they are all meant to live together 3 Cullens Forever :) great story! :P
| Koshivuh chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I loved this :D I was a little confused at the end, but I think I figured it out. I'm really excited to check out some of your other stories.
| london spam chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
This is great and there is so much plot to explore! No wonder there is such a desire to see more. I add my voice to the choir!
| SuperWhoLocked91 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
| cshorte chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
| A-SuperStar13 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Great job, loved it. I really thought that this one is great.
| fan chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Please continue this story
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
A good read, a bit confusing but really good.
Mostly I question the reason behind leaving the Cullens? hmmm..
I didn't get that...it leaves me very intrigued and pondering what next..
I did like the approach you took though, especially with Bella..
| izziey chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
i came across this story from the TWBB contest site and had to look it up! i truly hope that you continue the story. i am so intrigued.
now i am going to look back at your profile; i read your stories and want to know how i missed this one!
| coryoplayer chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I'm confused though. I always love to read the reviews and some for this chapter say that this story is done. But, it doesn't say complete at the top.
Please verify if this will be a story.
I sooooooooooooooooo want it to continue!
| biblepam chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
great one shot. ... Pam B.
| sellabella chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
yes do continue. It was a great story. Want to see earlier and of course later. Did they separate to keep the Volturi away or some other reason?