|Reviews for Bella Gomez|
| MEL24FAN chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
That was awesome.
| heyjued chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
At first I had to reread the story to understand the connections and absorption of powers that Bella had. Once I understood everything I really got into the this then it HAD to END! I would love to see this continue, even if it had to start at the beginning. This is an excellent plot, by a very talented writer.
| obsessedmom chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Really interesting... loved the twists on the story!
| kakashifan-0001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This would be a great story to continue and I hope you do.
| Scarlett72 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is really great and I hope that you will chose to write it as a whole story. I know I would definitely be along for the ride.
| Adlih chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
That was really good. Please continue wether from the beging or from this part either way it will be awesome! Please continue!
| Twi lover 21 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
a couple question...okay, a million and one questions, but these were the first to pop up in my mind:
did B an E blow up the house?
what about the visit from the volture?
How does B's power fully work?
who is chelsea?
who is B's father? (this isn't very important, but I just want to know anyway)
And the MOST IMPORTANT QUESTION OF ALL...
| DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
| TessLouise chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Great story - I'd definately read a multi-chap version.
| TwiSweetHeart chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
That was really good! A little confusing, but Im sure you could answer the questions by continuing it(;
| EAMC17 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Wow...u have to finish this...it was fantastic!
| whiplashes chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
| animelover0001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
oh my gosh i really liked this, and it was a brilliant ending :) will this stay as a oneshot or are you thinking about taking it further as a story? thank ou so much for this it was great
| edmom chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
you amaze as always
| bananaslugg chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
i hope you decide to continue this, it's a great idea for a story!