Reviews for Bella Gomez
MEL24FAN chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
That was awesome.
heyjued chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
At first I had to reread the story to understand the connections and absorption of powers that Bella had. Once I understood everything I really got into the this then it HAD to END! I would love to see this continue, even if it had to start at the beginning. This is an excellent plot, by a very talented writer.
obsessedmom chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Really interesting... loved the twists on the story!

kakashifan-0001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This would be a great story to continue and I hope you do.
Scarlett72 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is really great and I hope that you will chose to write it as a whole story. I know I would definitely be along for the ride.
Adlih chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
That was really good. Please continue wether from the beging or from this part either way it will be awesome! Please continue!
Twi lover 21 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
a couple question...okay, a million and one questions, but these were the first to pop up in my mind:

did B an E blow up the house?

what about the visit from the volture?

How does B's power fully work?

who is chelsea?

who is B's father? (this isn't very important, but I just want to know anyway)

DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Always cool...always!
TessLouise chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Great story - I'd definately read a multi-chap version.
TwiSweetHeart chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
That was really good! A little confusing, but Im sure you could answer the questions by continuing it(;
EAMC17 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Wow...u have to finish was fantastic!
whiplashes chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
animelover0001 chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
oh my gosh i really liked this, and it was a brilliant ending :) will this stay as a oneshot or are you thinking about taking it further as a story? thank ou so much for this it was great
edmom chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
you amaze as always
bananaslugg chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
i hope you decide to continue this, it's a great idea for a story!
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