Reviews for The Mary Sue Zone
Cheshire Catz chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
So I was really intrigued by the title, I didn't read it all kinda skimmed through it actually because I was afraid it may lead to something a little...bad. REALLY REALLY COOL THOUGH!
Firefly Conlon chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
Eavis chapter 2 . 6/30/2010
This is a good idea, and you write well. Problem, though. You've rated this 'T'. It really needs to be at least 'M'.

There are kids on here reading that aren't even 13 yet. This could, potentially, scar them for life. It's pretty graphic. It's fine to say Rose was a prostitute, but there is NO NEED to go into any details at all. At all.

Miss Sarah Louise chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
This is such a great idea! Please continue! Other than a few grammatical errors, this story rocks!

-Sarah 3
Cindy chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
om nom nom.
pen 'n notebook chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
The idea behind this is really unique and funny. A Newsies Horror Hotel is definitely one way to keep Mary Sues away. I can't wait for more.