|Reviews for KOKOMO|
| OmniGawker chapter 1 . 10/15/2020
| Ahsurika chapter 1 . 4/1/2019
well go and break my heart for the vorcha, why dontcha
This fic is absolutely incredible
| The Apocryphal One chapter 1 . 11/15/2018
Wow. Beautiful and tragic, an excellent in-depth depiction of a usually flat race. I genuinely got attached to Keesh and his controlled-but-wild personality, his struggles, his hate; I kept hoping things would get better and that end broke my heart. Just beautiful.
| Mangoose chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
I love this story but what does KOKOMO mean? Sorry if that went right over my head.
| Jaal Ama Darav chapter 1 . 2/1/2016
A very good interesting story that looks into one of the less known alien races in Mass Effect.
| DragonsDeadAndDancing chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
This was a punch in the gut. And it was awesome. You're as excellent as a writer as you are as an artist!
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
| kittyribs chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Holy shit that was the most unexpectedly heartbreaking thing I have ever read. Five stars and an A for you, friend. Jesus Christ.
| HVK chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
A genuine and very well-written tearjerker that really shows WHY the vorcha would have wanted everyone else to choke and die. Poor people...
| AnAncientBard chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
And now I feel bad for all the vorcha I killed...
Very good, very unique.
| harmonyfb chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Wow. That was fantastic. I love that with this short piece you opened up an entire backstory for what was clearly just a throwaway reference. :)
| Drunk1nD0nuts chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Wow...this is an incredible one-shot. You really captured what it meant to be 'alien', and executed it beautifully. You gave depth to an alien race that is presented as extremely one-dimensional in the games, and really make the reader think about whether they are just mindless vermin, or something more.
This was a fantastic fic, a 10/10. Good work!
| Orifiel chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
First perspective of a vorcha I've ever read, and I was blown away. You wrote Keesh's life, family, recruitment, and end with amazing emotional impact. Your prose was perfect for his perspective, and the entire story flowed very well. I saw nothing to criticize. This was brilliant.
| Solidstach chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
A new, interesting perspective. For some reason I am reminded of Jack London's "White Fang".
Well written typical life of a Vorcha. Nice one-shot.
| A Dozen Lemmings chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
That was one of the saddest things I've ever read... I sorta want a Vorcha Squad mate now.