Reviews for Ashes
Shortscribbling chapter 1 . 7/7/2010
This is a really interesting chapter, I think it would be great if you continued it (not that i'm looking for another Eden or anything...) You have a real talent in writing :)
Tara1189 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
I do believe I begged you in one of my previous reviews for you to grace us with a Riddle/Ginny story - lucky me! I do think there is definite potential for this to continue. As a oneshot, it seems rather sparse, though the matter-of-fact way you almost clinically described the body count makes it almost *more* chilling, rather than less.

If you do continue this, I would be expecting - and wanting - to hear more of Ginny's mental state due to the shared history she has with Tom. This would also form a fascinating contrast to Eden. In Eden, you showed the slow and gradual development of a psychological bond between captor and captive - in Ashes, that bond would already be *there*, and how the characters would act and respond to this would be the driving force of the narrative tension. There is so much to explore with the effects that Tom would have had on Ginny, and if anyone can portray this convincingly, it's you.
UnbreakableLittleMind15 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I liked it a lot! Please continue it! :)
Olivia-Mary chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Continue for sure!
AngelONight chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
oh man, this has so much potential. i was in love/obsessed with Eden so i'm sure i'd be the same way with this. if you want to, you should totally continue! you'd have loads of fans regardless! :)
Marble Meadow chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Personally I'd like to see what will happen next. I've always loved your stories. Although I'd be a little sad if Ginny was tortured the same way as Hermione in your other story. Intriguing start over all.
telperien chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
What you written so far is very dark and interesting.

I can't really see a Ginny Voldemort pairing (was hoping for Severus and Ginny) but it's possibly you could make it work.

It will be very very dark though.
vluz chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I‘d love to read more about this story. Please continue.
Elisa Mirror chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I really wanted to read a Voldemort/Ginny story written by you. If you can't make it real, no one else could. At least right now I believe so. The prelude looks somewhat forced to me. Too much, too cruel, too real. But that is why I would like to see what you could make happen afterwards. I want to know what ideas you have. I want you to write the whole story.

But who cares about me:) You should be the one to decide. I know what I felt when I read your 'Eden'. Sweet torture, torture with a meaning, leading somewhere, pointing things I wouldn't have noticed otherwise. But torture nevertheless. I'm judging from my own perspective, that's only natural. Doesn't it hurt to write it? It must. Is it worth it? Maybe it even helps. I can't know. Besides, people obsessed with painful ideas do great things. I would still love it if you wrote something lighter. At least only for yourself.

Sorry if I sound offending. Say a word and I'll shut up. That said, I'm still going to wait for your updates and enjoy your stories. Thanks for doing this.
celticscorpion chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
I am intrigued by this and would love to read more. I thought Eden was a great read- intense in the right way- and I think this definitely has potential. Keep going with it.
Rosetta Penn chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
No matter what you write I'm always going to give you the benefit of the doubt. I could tell you the problems I see in this, from a more technical standpoint of reading as a writer, and just my own beliefs/opinions of the characters in the series, but I'm not going to, at least not for now. I know you've pretty much been told the same thing over and over, but Eden changed me, and inspired me, and I trust you enough to say that if you do continue this, then I'm sure it will be worth reading.
uckpa chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Interesting plot... I have no idea what will come next but I am very much interested!
MollysSister chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Ewwww I did not enjoy Neville squeezing Trevor to death. It brought back vivid memories of disceting frogs in biology class. Icky.

Are you thinking about going the SS/GP direction? I like the idea that Riddle some how remembers Ginny. Although his attention is probably going to end up being a very very bad thing.

Should you continue it? YES please
XxXVampires-are-awesomeXxX chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Oh my gosh...please continue! I love your stories they are amazing! Eden gave my obsession for Lucius...
suddenlyseekingsansa chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Ohmygod.

You must continue this. If I thought Eden made me cry, this just beat it by miles. For some reason you capture emotions, any kind, better than anyone I've ever read. Your descriptions of everything are beautiful and perfect.

Bailey
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