|Reviews for One Night|
| Joshua Blade chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
Incredible. Very well done! You described the feelings and actions extremely well! I commend you for this amazing and inspirational story. Thank you. ;)
| Andrew Frey chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
10 out of 10. Good story but it could've pure amazing if it had more porn in it. P.s next time you should write about
a foursome with mike,Lucy,sue and sandy. You don't need to do it just sum ideas. make a porno story with with abbey and daisy having thar first time sex together. Bye,love
| Joy Division Fan For Life chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Not bad, though it would've been nice to see some back story over how Sandy was able to go to Mike, via booking a flight and finding the time to do so and etc.
While there's not too much to get out of the story, I say it shines for one simple reason: the ending metaphor.
Having a special and happy experience happen to you is amazing, even if it is only a one-time thing only. It's sad because it's only a one time deal, but that's exactly what makes it special, since there will never be another time that matches the experience. I can say that I've experienced the same kind of things in my life, ones I'll always remember because they were one of a kind.
Your metaphor also applies to one-shot stories in general. I've read several wonderful one-shots that I wish were longer because they were so damn good, or actual novels where I wish there was a little more to satisfy the reader. They're all special in that right, since they're all one of a kind. This story does a great job of showcasing that.
You can take the metaphor a step further as well. See, I'm a LucyXPaulo fan, right? The two chapters that grant my wish are Ch.53 and Ch.59. Now, I wish Lucy and Paulo would go out or something in the actual comic, but by the looks of the story so far, that either isn't going to happen for a long time or not at all. If things don't go the way I want them to as the story progresses, I can always go back to Ch.53 and Ch.59 to relive my fantasies, can't I? Just like Mike can always remember this night in your fanfic and can always remember it when he wants to.
Your story, honestly, was far from great, but the ending message is absolutely superb, true, important, etc, and that's why I love it so. :)
| Mikanada chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Very well written, if I read this about characters I never knew than it wouldn't do much for me, so that's why it's fantastic as a FanFiction. btw MikexSandy ftw.
| Tucker chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
Bow chicka bow wow.