|Reviews for Under the Milky Way|
| Starshinesoldier chapter 7 . 1/27
Squee! Too cute!
| zairoon chapter 7 . 10/5/2017
Ah my god. I read this fic in one go (all afternoon really) and I absolutely LOVED it ! Probably one of the best I've read so far for KaiShin !
Aaah it almost ended too quickly :p
jokes aside, this was amazing. The plot, the writing, the humour and drama... it was a magnificent piece of work ! I salute you ! :)
Hope you will continue to write about these two hotties !
| Bearanting chapter 1 . 9/22/2017
I knew this one coming.. Damn it!
| Summercloud chapter 7 . 6/18/2017
That was really great! I laughed, I smiled, I went "Awwwww..." multiple times. Thank you for the lovely story!
| Trickster79 chapter 7 . 5/16/2017
Hahahahahaha, omg I loved this soo much *_*
Like, no sh*t, Kudo should have gone to a temple and bless his luck, because he could have very well died after taking the anthidote. And, lol I loved the fact that he was voting for a Harry Potter themed room. Kaito should have been on board too, given the fact that he's a magician himself :D
But they could always put a Easter themed room, xd. I loved this last sentence like "Omg, what do we do? I thought that the time to talk about the birds and the bees wouldn't come until she was at least 30!"
Great work, indeed :D
| icecream.p919 chapter 7 . 4/8/2017
This is amazing I just read the whole thing in one day and I'm sooooooo happy right now thank you for making this and please countinue to make more
| Niha161 chapter 7 . 4/7/2017
| luneXD chapter 7 . 3/24/2017
It was one of my favorite story!
writing and characters are awesome!
| Sachiko13 chapter 7 . 3/19/2017
I absolutely adore this! It's spicy, then it turns sweet... it managed to turn me into a brainless mush in just about the first two chapters. Although I have to say it's a bit too prolonged. I think it would be more enjoyable if there were more civil Kaito meeting Shin scenes. Still, one of my all-time favourite fanfictions!
| Jissy2013 chapter 7 . 1/12/2017
Great story so sweet love it
| Jissy2013 chapter 5 . 1/10/2017
So sweet love it
| bluesnowflakes21 chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
how is ran's daughter at ekoda high school?
| GoesDownWithTheShip chapter 3 . 11/11/2016
This story is probably one of my most favorite kaishin works (and there are only few of them that fit my picky taste) the setting is wonderful, some characterisations are a bit off but not too damaging and honestly i love the way you made the story seem very sweet despite the M rating and Mpreg plot (which is not everyone's cup of tea). the volume of each chapter is satisfying, i couldn't put it down and that shows how you captured reader's attention by each paragraph. also, the pacing is perfect without being too awkward with how many lemon scenes you put in them lol i can't complain. quite frankly i enjoyed the hell out of it , you're very talented with lemon scenes and not many author of this fandom could pull it off without it being too obviously written by teenage girls. One thing i have to complain though, is the ending/prologue. there are so many things wrong and unsatisfying with the way you wrapped it up. i expected so much more from such solid fanfic. it was like eating a perfectly well made cheesecake and being left with burnt crust on top of it. if it's not too much to ask, i would like to see some scenes before and after the baby's birth. how about their families and friends reaction, and how they cope up with it. either way, great job.
| Lolzer chapter 7 . 10/5/2016
This is how the anime came to be XD I mean it is obviously the PG version of this XD...
| PipeDream chapter 7 . 9/29/2016
Oh good god I adore this, but I do have to wonder how Kaori has a friend her age who is Ran's daughter if one of the big issuses for Shinichi was that he was a teenage pregnancy
Ran doesn't even appear to be ain a relationship a the time so.. it's a bit confusing
But I do love how it ended on them having to tell her the story of how they became a couple: which is this story
It's also interesting, and kind of sad, that they had to fake so much: Kaori doesn't even know that Kaito is her biological father, as they've been boyfriends for 14 years and Kid is still looking for Pandora and even how we don't get to see the future for over characters like who Ran is with or what happened to Shiho or how the hell the birth went if they had to keep it a secret from everyone and the only person who knew didn't have full qualifications
There's so much that feels missing that I kind of wish there was more, even though where it ended was spot-on