Reviews for Under the Milky Way
Jissy2013 chapter 7 . 1/12
Great story so sweet love it
Jissy2013 chapter 5 . 1/10
So sweet love it
bluesnowflakes21 chapter 7 . 12/28/2016
how is ran's daughter at ekoda high school?
GoesDownWithTheShip chapter 3 . 11/11/2016
This story is probably one of my most favorite kaishin works (and there are only few of them that fit my picky taste) the setting is wonderful, some characterisations are a bit off but not too damaging and honestly i love the way you made the story seem very sweet despite the M rating and Mpreg plot (which is not everyone's cup of tea). the volume of each chapter is satisfying, i couldn't put it down and that shows how you captured reader's attention by each paragraph. also, the pacing is perfect without being too awkward with how many lemon scenes you put in them lol i can't complain. quite frankly i enjoyed the hell out of it , you're very talented with lemon scenes and not many author of this fandom could pull it off without it being too obviously written by teenage girls. One thing i have to complain though, is the ending/prologue. there are so many things wrong and unsatisfying with the way you wrapped it up. i expected so much more from such solid fanfic. it was like eating a perfectly well made cheesecake and being left with burnt crust on top of it. if it's not too much to ask, i would like to see some scenes before and after the baby's birth. how about their families and friends reaction, and how they cope up with it. either way, great job.
Lolzer chapter 7 . 10/5/2016
This is how the anime came to be XD I mean it is obviously the PG version of this XD...
PipeDream chapter 7 . 9/29/2016
Oh good god I adore this, but I do have to wonder how Kaori has a friend her age who is Ran's daughter if one of the big issuses for Shinichi was that he was a teenage pregnancy
Ran doesn't even appear to be ain a relationship a the time so.. it's a bit confusing
But I do love how it ended on them having to tell her the story of how they became a couple: which is this story
It's also interesting, and kind of sad, that they had to fake so much: Kaori doesn't even know that Kaito is her biological father, as they've been boyfriends for 14 years and Kid is still looking for Pandora and even how we don't get to see the future for over characters like who Ran is with or what happened to Shiho or how the hell the birth went if they had to keep it a secret from everyone and the only person who knew didn't have full qualifications
There's so much that feels missing that I kind of wish there was more, even though where it ended was spot-on
RogueKiller chapter 7 . 7/30/2016
Simply wonderful
Estriella chapter 7 . 7/28/2016
Haha Kaori is just like Kaito. Cute and just magic but intelgent like Shinichi. I really like idea.
Yenaya chapter 7 . 6/27/2016
Does that mean Ran was pregnant at the same time Shinichi was?
LMeg9.20 chapter 7 . 6/23/2016
I'm so glad that you rewrote this. It was a great story before, but now it's even better. I think you did a great job with it.
Scaranpannoir chapter 7 . 6/4/2016
HAHAHHAA KAORI FOUND OUT WAAAAAAAY TOO FAST XDDD HAHAHHAA
Artemisia480 chapter 7 . 5/28/2016
This was a really fun story. I loved how you worked in the mpreg aspect and made it different from a woman pregnancy. My only complaint is that Kaori's classmates being Ran and Hakuba's children doesn't really make sense since Kaori was the result of a teenage pregnancy. It would have made a bit more sense to make them OCs or maybe use the Division 1 officers as parents? I could see Natsuki being Sato and Takagi's daughter. Other then that thought I loved the story and especially love how you blended Kaito and Shinichi's personalities into Kaori without making her an outright clone of either of them. I'm off to see if you have any more Kaishin stories for me to read.
GreenDrkness chapter 7 . 5/2/2016
I love how Kaito is still a prankster
So they never told Kaori that Kaito was the other father or her origins? Like I guess it makes sense but still...
This was a cute and hot story
Keep on the writes
d chapter 7 . 5/2/2016
So cute and adorable. I loved it. The end was quite humorous as well.
BLINIX chapter 7 . 4/19/2016
Nice story, and that last chapter was really cute and amazing.
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