Reviews for Moving Forward
DixieAnnabelle chapter 6 . 3/20/2014
Please tell me that you plan to finish this story. You are a very talented writer but I see that you haven't written on this story since Oct. of last year this is a shame. I would like to know how everything turns out. What of the Swans,the Cullen's "Edward and Alice"? But most of all what of the Whitlock coven?
DixieAnnaBelle chapter 7 . 1/7/2014
I am so enjoying this story line and hope that you can update soon.
belleveloso chapter 7 . 10/23/2013
Good chapter
BlackestPurity chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
Oh dear Lord! Praise every being ever thought to be a God! I was starting to think you'd never update and I'd be left with half of an amazing story. Please post again super soon! PLEASE!
Pixi3Fae chapter 6 . 6/3/2013
when are you going to update?
bella14340 chapter 6 . 4/11/2013
wow
K chapter 3 . 1/20/2013
WHAT THE FUCK NO NO BOOOOO NO THAT IS NOT HOW IT WAS SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN! FUCK YOU!
Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 3 . 2/25/2012
WHAT THE FUCK? EDWARD WOULD NEVER DO THAT! THAT IS SO NOT EDWARD! OOC! I'M OUT OF HERE!
magi23 chapter 6 . 10/4/2011
wow

please dont give up on the fic

its really awesome

bella its just to good i cant stand her how can she still protect them after what they did to her?

please please please upade soon...
KaelynMarieSalvatore chapter 6 . 7/18/2011
please update! :)
Lil-B-Rebel chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
plz update soon

cnt wait fore more

love this story its brill

x lil_blood x
xXxAllegraxXx chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
Edward and Alice are such shitheads...They should just kill them...slowly and painfully...

Hope they'll get the rest of the Cullens to listen and believe the truth...Bella sure needs to get her family back. Hope she won't do something stupid to "keep Jasper safe" like running away or stuff...
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 6 . 6/24/2011
love it

:p
Vampir3.S3duction chapter 6 . 6/23/2011
If Esme was any kind of mother then she would have gotten Bella's side as well rather then just jump and believe Edward. Esme is a pretend mother with no true feelings. She's just trying to be everyone's mother because she is pathetic along with Carlisle who is supposed to be SO full of compassion when in reality he just wants to please his first born. Alice is a bitch who is probably looser then anything known to man or anyone on earth, lol. Rose should have known Bella better then that and shouldn't have believed what Edward said. That shows how much faith she REALLY had in Bella and after Bella protected her and everything. I still love Emmett, lol. And the fact they all turned their backs on Jasper just like that tells me they are all fakes and just pretend to be all loving and everything when in reality they are all the biggest judgemental hypocrites alive. They all deserve what happens to them. Except maybe Emmett and Rose should grovel at Bella's feet, lol. But Esme deserves to burn for the things she said and not believeing in Bella at all. Any genius could have seen that Edward was becoming distant. He would even COMFORT her after her and Rose were attacked. Oh yeah, because holding a girls HAND makes her feel better then a hug would. Of course, the vamps who claim to be SO smart and perceptive are really and truly the dumbest things EVER. I so LOVE this story :). I love Peter Char and Jasper though. The Cullens can all burn. Maybe they should get a taste of what Bella had to go through because of them and their Golden duo.
wendy1969 chapter 6 . 6/23/2011
great update and thank you. i thought you maybe was nt gonna but when i got this e-mail notice with the link i was so thankful. mind you i had to reread it to remember the story :)

lol

it is getting interesting so far.
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