Reviews for Clear Skies
ferret assassin nin chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Wow. This is really good. I always wondered what would happen after the movie ends. Thanks for answering that. When she "broke up" with him, I immediately thought, "Poor Ben! Why is it always him?" Then, when Ben realized that another option existed according to the excellent advice given to him by Sean, I thought, "Yes! Follow her, Ben. She still loves you, but she could never ask you to follower her. " If he hadn't followed her, I would have thought, "You idiot! Why didn't you follow her?" lol Anyway, thank you for writing a story in this category as I believe such an artistic movie deserves more exposure. Also, your characterization of Ben is spot on. :D

ferret nin
somethingborrowed3 chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I was literally about to kill something until I read the end (you resolved it in two sentences!)...that ending was so abrupt and came so quickly...

While I loved the ending and was about to mope about his second breakup in the same amount of months, I wished you had expanded the ending a bit more :(

Great work!
Generally Electric chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
What a beautifully written story. Cashback is a wonderful movie and you've really captured Ben's personality. Keep up the excellent work! D
alethea293 chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
awww... so sweet that he goes with her 333

and congrats on capturing the essence of what is Ben and his story-telling perfectly... I wish I was as poetic when I'm suffering from insomnia

good job girl!