|Reviews for Turf Wars, Caught in the Middle|
| MatingInspires chapter 28 . 3/4
Thanks for sharing
| Kimmie43 chapter 28 . 1/5/2013
I really liked the story and enjoyed reading it. The only thing I didn't like was the fact that Bella kept running from E when times was rough. That was really immature and I wanted to smack her and E always let her go. UGH! I could have slapped them both. :) Great story though.
| ashl3ysimpson chapter 4 . 12/27/2012
Thinking he is undercovet fbi... liking this so far.
| asam75 chapter 28 . 10/12/2012
I was looking for a "Mobward" story and found yours. While it wasn't exactly that, it was a good read that I enjoyed. Your Bella grew nicely at the end. Thank you for writing and posting this.
| gitgit chapter 9 . 10/11/2012
holy shit they are being attacked left right and centre
| gitgit chapter 8 . 10/11/2012
wonder what he has to say that he is undercover hmmmm?
| gitgit chapter 7 . 10/11/2012
| gitgit chapter 6 . 10/11/2012
ohhhh look at that!
| gitgit chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
what the frick must bella always slap him?
| gitgit chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
well he is part of the fbi isnt he?
| gitgit chapter 3 . 10/11/2012
oooo edward pov will be interesting after she nearly tried to junk punch him!
| gitgit chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
well llooks like Jake was after her for information
and to hurt her should have listened to Charlie
| gitgit chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
well looks like bella is in for some troule and a ride of her life if you ask me
| asam75 chapter 16 . 9/27/2012
I don't know if you're still reading your reviews, but you asked for some and I wanted to comment on this chapter.
["And to think that I actually loved you. Hell maybe I still do. But Bella, you don't deserve me."
A/N: ok don't throw tomatoes.]
I applaud this line and sentiment. How Bella thinks it is okay to throw tantrums and storm off like a two year old is beyond me. And throwing heavy objects at someone's head and causing a concussion with no apology? That's egregious behavior and she doesn't deserve him...she's certifiable not passionate.
I'm enjoying this story (except when I want to slap Bella silly) 18 months after you finished it. Thank you.
| Lily1992 chapter 28 . 4/13/2012
I loved the Story it was great D