Reviews for Breaking Forwards |
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Tony Moonstone chapter 28 . 5/16 This story was very intense. I've never read a story where "Rape" was more noticed before and loads of damaged caused by 3 members of the Weasley family. It was hard to read sometimes but I'm happy in the end that the Rapists all died. Thank you for writing this story. Take care and be well! |
Tony Moonstone chapter 4 . 5/16 I'm the first reviewer of 2024. Wahoo! Wow, Harry is going through some really tough times. It's good that Harry has Blaise. I only hope that Snape and Blaise will be able to help Harry heal. Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
maiqsmail chapter 7 . 11/2/2023 Ah, yes, Harry throws a fit about how his life sucks and Snape has an epiphany that he's Lily's son, not James'. Unfortunate, majority of severitus fanfics follow this scheme. Overall, this is AU with barely anything left from canon as a foundation, the gist is that everyone has sex with everyone else while majority of non-criminals are very unhappy and it's not that interesting in itself for me to continue reading. Ta-ta! |
maiqsmail chapter 5 . 11/2/2023 So do we have Umbitch here or what? Cedric died but did Harry took the graveyard portkey in the end of 3WT? |
maiqsmail chapter 3 . 11/2/2023 Usually when Hermione is portrayed that mindlessly attached to Ronald in fanfics, there is some love potion involved. |
maiqsmail chapter 2 . 11/2/2023 Oh dear. Now Ron is OOC evil and Hermi is somehow his gf and not a virgin. This can't be good. |
maiqsmail chapter 1 . 11/2/2023 Huh. I'm a little anxious that this Harry is that another edgy anime protagonist character, but I'll wait and see. Hmm, what about Sirius? He doesn't mention him at all. |
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 28 . 2/25/2023 that's was certainly abrupt ending. it was a relatively happy ending after such a dark story so that was nice. I enjoyed this story. hopefully there is a sequel. I'm going to go check right now. |
TsukuyoGintoki chapter 21 . 2/25/2023 oh God. not one of those stories that make Harry start talking like a toddler just because he's getting attention Snape. there was only one line which I'm going to ignore. hopefully it doesn't continue. |
Calmzone1 chapter 27 . 12/2/2022 Wow. I had read this a few years ago, I can’t remember if I finished it or if it was sacrificed to the computer gods or ‘dang, I lost all my open browser tabs!’ But I remembered parts of it. Extremely hard to write. Kudos. Lol, tried to post..already posted. So, I did read to the end |
DoraLupinTonks chapter 28 . 11/16/2022 i really liked it...and i have always hated Ron! my god! but awesome story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2022 Can't stand any more of this . Supposed to be a story not some instruction manual . Yuck! |
BrainII chapter 24 . 9/1/2022 Always hated Ron and this makes me hate him more. |
Guest chapter 28 . 4/6/2022 brilliant! |
Pizzalover1.0 chapter 3 . 4/3/2022 Way to go author flaming commentators |