|Reviews for Jim's Lament|
| defunct1 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
ALL RED-SHIRTED PERSONNEL GO SOMEWHERE ELSE. I 3 YOU.
| Lula1 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Oh my, the depth of feeling in this piece was amazing. I have difficulty writing Kirk's feelings. You portrayed him wonderfully. Enjoyed it much!
| MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
i thought iw ould hate it wont lie but i loved it! Its one of my favorite storis now great job it was perfect how you ended it. Also i agre abou tthe ittalics and hten regular that is a pain in the ass