Reviews for Sleep In Sunlight
Spiritwolf13 chapter 8 . 3/20
This. Is. Beautiful. I cried so hard.
raelle23 chapter 8 . 11/16/2014
Oh come on I would love to see them kiss or do it or something and to see how the recovery presses goes all of the ups and downs, you could make such and awesome sequal to this story please I'm begging you continue
colorfulpuke chapter 8 . 6/27/2014
Omfg I loved it
xxxxXAnimeloverXxxxx chapter 8 . 5/19/2014
I love this story. Its sad but heart warming.
Kaoru Anderson chapter 8 . 1/29/2014
NO SHIKA WHY DID YOU DIE! btw great story!
cary99 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
Love it
berry5tz chapter 8 . 12/18/2013
Wow, this was great. It may not have been the longest story. But I think having a more concentrated effort that stays on focus is better then a story that drifts off.
Nice job!
HoothootOwls chapter 8 . 10/13/2013
;w; I love it. What a cute love story.
Addiction's Curse chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
Constructive criticism below, feel free to skip.
When you switch speakers you should start a new line. For example this:

"I really don't want to go there." Sasuke said to his older brother from the passenger's seat. "Well, that's to bad." Itachi replied. "You did something stupid, so you have to pay the price." Sasuke pressed his foot against the dash board and rolled his eyes. "So my punishment is to sit with some diseased freak for four hours. Isn't that dangerous?" He said sarcastically. "No. They wouldn't put you with someone contagious." Itachi glanced at Sasuke. "Get you foot off of there."

Would look like this.

"I really don't want to go there." Sasuke said to his older brother from the passenger's seat.
"Well, that's to bad." Itachi replied. "You did something stupid, so you have to pay the price." Sasuke pressed his foot against the dash board and rolled his eyes.
"So my punishment is to sit with some diseased freak for four hours. Isn't that dangerous?" He said sarcastically. "No. They wouldn't put you with someone contagious." Itachi glanced at Sasuke. "Get you foot off of there."

See how the switch corresponds with the new line? It helps the story flow and minimises confusion as to which character is speaking.

On another note, I really enjoyed reading this story. This is actually my second time reading it. I read it for the first time on deviantart.
NamiNavigator chapter 7 . 2/18/2013
AWW! This was such a cute story. I really like how you left the rest of the story up to our own imaginations. _ Have a nice day.
someone chapter 8 . 1/16/2013
really good story :) even though I wouldn't qualify it as "tragedy" as Naruto survive in the end
adaydreamer95 chapter 8 . 9/22/2012
i love this story, but why kill shikamaru
yome- san chapter 8 . 9/6/2012
best story ever
OrangeStar802 chapter 8 . 5/16/2012
It was nice...though, am not sure why you had to make kiba and shikamaru sick as well *shrug*
violetkisses chapter 8 . 4/7/2012
So very beautiful. I absolutely love the end. I am such a sucker for happy endings.
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