Reviews for Darlin'
Its Just Jess chapter 1 . 9/2
I'll be honest, this could be so much better but forgiven that it's quite old and gives the 'Just for fun' vibe, I'll be quite kind. First off when you write smut or anything that involves sexual tension between your characters, when they 'Moan' you have to make it look believable. Writing 'Ahhhh' for Ellis over and over to me made it sound like he was screaming, which could come off as rape o_O; So be careful of that fact m'dear as you son't want people getting the wrong ideas.
Diamondfiend chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
xd
Maiyosoyomi chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
this is good, but id like some back story that leads up to this then expands. i do hope u add more to this. it would be awesome! 3
XxAliceHazCoOkiexX chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Holy ajdndmdmaskdnjxnsksnjddjn! I over reacted when Ellis kissed him! I was litterally taking a spasm attack! Omfg it was sooooo good! I love Alex Mercer! I also love Ellis (ily Nick but not as much srry) lol. At first I was like 'nah this won't work' but I was proven wrong. Miracles can happen and you proved they can just from that story! Imma read this everytime I feel like spazzing out. Great job

Alice
thelizfantasy09 chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Hehehehehe meeguuuuustaaaaa OuO moarplz?
CallMeBoxMan chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
OMGOSH! Finally found one of this pairing and it is amazingly well written and got right to the smex! Feed my yaoi addiction for the day! XD

thought I was one of the few to think of those two together and now I was proven wrong! C:

Please do more of these two, would love to read more from you with this pairing. 333
KittyWillCutYou chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
yay~ *jumps into the air with my feet kicked back in slow-mo* *w*
Khi chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
I love it
Acrylic Stain chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I LOVE IT! *girly scream* I just got into prototype and my bff was like "read this NOW" so I did. You write amazingly well! Oh, how I wished it was more than one chapter...Oh well! n.n happy face
Espada-Moon chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
this was just AWESOME! you got to make more fics about this pairing! You made into this pairing now 333