|Reviews for Just Breathe|
| kisamari chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
The tension between them caused tingles in the palms of my hands.
I'm sad that this is completed. :c
It's wonderful though. c:
I'd love it immensely if you wrote more for this pairing!
| cerberus angel chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
All I can say is wow. That was very deep the tension between them was thick. Poor Jordan and Ruby too. I wish the show had continued I had my fingers crossed that they weren't related, but like you said we'll never know, but this piece was amazing. i can't wait for you to write more. )
| WhereIsYourHeart10 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
this was amazing stuff :) I always thought they belonged together too.
| DarkBrownEyes08 chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
That was absolutely gorgeous. A lovely one shot and it would be great if you did a sequel, if not its just as great like that. Great job.
| sokkantylee chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Amazing! This deserves a sequel.
| monkeypants17 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
That was just fucking gorgeous.