|Reviews for In His Mind|
| shey chapter 5 . 3/23/2013
Very nice story.
| Oridara chapter 3 . 8/5/2012
Well, the good side of this is that Jared has a week off of duty to spend with his honey. Hopefully Kim won't be too mad at Jared for the slip up and they can enjoy their week together. Jared won't have any POV in the story?
| Oridara chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
"Us wolf-girls have to stay together!" Cute, and it's good that Emily was available to speak with Kim about her problem. Emily could almost hold a wolf-girl orientation! It seems like Emily is runnin' thangs a little bit.
This chapter just smells of high school...Sunny-D, Pop Tarts in a paper towel, working in groups, Spanish class, lockers, and doodling on notebooks...ahhhh. Takes me back a few.
I wonder what has provoked Colin & Brady to do this. That sort of activity will not promote brotherhood in the pack at all. Seems like their ass is grass when Sam gets to them.
| Wolfiegirl 26 chapter 5 . 6/21/2012
I liked it. I just wish it had More detail. Check out Kim and jared's dirty of there love!
| Ms.Rossi chapter 4 . 5/31/2012
Oh yes, how sad high school life is ;D
| Bendleshnitz chapter 5 . 4/14/2012
What a sweet, sexy, funny, romantic story! Loved it :D
| Ms.Rossi chapter 5 . 3/4/2012
I smiled through the whole damn story!
| ChristinaAguileraFan chapter 3 . 2/28/2012
Aha i love this story
| lel2768 chapter 5 . 10/31/2011
Finally someone who got virginity (losing it) right. It isn't pleasant. It's sore.
Thank you for being honest.
| lel2768 chapter 4 . 10/31/2011
A very sweet chapter. Well done
| lel2768 chapter 3 . 10/31/2011
Brilliant. Sam handled the situation really well.
| lel2768 chapter 2 . 10/31/2011
Excellent chapter. I often wondered how Emily and Sam coped with that.
I think the boys are gonna get a huge ticking off.
| lel2768 chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Wow - this is completely different from anything I've ever read before. It's great. Wolfy... lol. Can I ask? Did you write this before the illustrated guide came out? Names etc? I had that problem too. It fucked my story right up?
| KayMarieXW chapter 5 . 9/21/2011
I really liked this story. Kim & Jared are such a lovely couple.
I thought it was perfect that their first time wasn't amazing. They are so in love and it felt really real. I'm sure it will get better from here!
Thank you for writing.
| KayMarieXW chapter 4 . 9/21/2011
I love Jared. Alex is great too. I really love that Jared is worried about twin telepathy! lol