Reviews for DeTrine and Conquer
snapeathy chapter 1 . 2/3
This story needs at least 10 more chapters. Great character writing!
LynxbyLynx chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
WAIT... This can't be IT... This CAN'T be complete... TELL ME THIS IS CONTINUED somewhere...please...please...It's so well written...I want to see more...read more... PLEASE... Omg... It was amazing...
Vivienne Grainger chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Poor Ramjet. A very funny (if subtly so) look at how the best-laid plans of mechs and men gang aft to the Pit (apologies to Robert Burns).
Starfire201 act. acct chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I'd say Ramjet got exactly what he deserved.
Kitsune Swift chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Interesting little crushes you set up here. I almost feel kind of sorry for Ramjet for how things played out XD
beebot chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This is really good! Are you going to continue it? Either way, I enjoyed this little story.
9aza chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
*snickering* Aw Ramjet, how it sucks to be you right now! XD

Great story, it was hilarious.
iiskaa chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I thought this was cute and well written! Loved the one-sided crushes, especially that little hint of Starscream/Soundwave.