|Reviews for DeTrine and Conquer|
| snapeathy chapter 1 . 2/3
This story needs at least 10 more chapters. Great character writing!
| LynxbyLynx chapter 1 . 7/1/2013
WAIT... This can't be IT... This CAN'T be complete... TELL ME THIS IS CONTINUED somewhere...please...please...It's so well written...I want to see more...read more... PLEASE... Omg... It was amazing...
| Vivienne Grainger chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Poor Ramjet. A very funny (if subtly so) look at how the best-laid plans of mechs and men gang aft to the Pit (apologies to Robert Burns).
| Starfire201 act. acct chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
I'd say Ramjet got exactly what he deserved.
| Kitsune Swift chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Interesting little crushes you set up here. I almost feel kind of sorry for Ramjet for how things played out XD
| beebot chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
This is really good! Are you going to continue it? Either way, I enjoyed this little story.
| 9aza chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
*snickering* Aw Ramjet, how it sucks to be you right now! XD
Great story, it was hilarious.
| iiskaa chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I thought this was cute and well written! Loved the one-sided crushes, especially that little hint of Starscream/Soundwave.