Reviews for Good Luck
DarkEcoFreak chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Wow! That was great! I've always wondered why they didn't kiss BEFORE the race too.
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Yes! Love it!
babycakesninja chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
OMGGGGG, I absolutely love this! I wish I came up with someone so wonderful as this. So simple, yet so beautiful. I love Jak and Keira. Keep writing, dude.
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Very cute. I liked the last line in particular. Keep writing
Fishyicon chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Great story - as always. I love the way you describe things: actions, tones, thoughts... you're like a real author! I'd just like to say that I loved Keira's line, "If you win the antidote, we'll talk later, okay?" And then of course, the Orange Lighting's entrance... it made me laugh!
spikes3 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
woo! haha cute, i liked it, ]
abandoned account 6.2013 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Both the picture on Deviantart and this fanfiction are truly wonderful. I think you've done a really great job on this, and I'd love to see more like this from you. :)
kkann chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Yesyesyes! *glomps it*

You did get it done, and I love it so much! XD

"What...What was that for?" Aww, Jak, ya gotta ask?

Go Jak x Keira! This just made my day. I love it!

You're an awesome Flying Giant Dark Jak buddy. XD