|Reviews for Super Mario Eds: Journey for the Power Stars|
| Dr. Angryslacks chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
You seem to be a fan of Legend of the Seven Stars correct? I do approve but would you mind adding more detail to the surrondings?
Like this Toad Town for example, should the Eds go to it describe the buildings the weather among other things. It's those little details which allow the reader to get a mental image.
However I ask you to cease and decist on the OC submissions. Not only do that break the rules but it also gives you the impression of review farming which is not good.
| Harrison chapter 2 . 11/4/2010
I kind of like this story already.
| Harrison chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
Name: Harry Vargon
Power: Can control water and summon water based creatures.
Side(Heroes or Evil Tim): Evil Tim in the beginning, and then turns to the hero's side
Other Info: Has an older brother trapped/lost somewhere.
Height: same as Double D
And tell Me if you have any ideas you want to happen in the story.
I'll let you figure that out.
| supersaiyan3goku chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I like it! And I got an OC for ya!
Power: Lightning Control (Can create lightning swords/blasts/shields/est)
Other Info: This boy doesn't remember who he is. The Ed's find him on a rock, and he only remembers that he has only one perpose. But he 'still' doesn't know what perpose!
Height: three 1/2 feet (Short, but deadly!)