Reviews for NaruHina: Petals
Dancing-Souls chapter 14 . 4/28/2013
wow glad Hinata is out of the hospital, but I hope things start to look brighter for her.
APSH chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
nice chapter.. keep going
LivingByFanFic chapter 5 . 9/25/2012
3
maylo88 chapter 13 . 3/14/2012
Hey there, well i read your story and i thought it was amazing! :D i am 10000% NaruHina fan! And besides! If you make the main couple any other tbh itwouldnt make much sense becuase youve been hinting at naruhina from chapter 1! Oh the ending, well... I want to say happy ending please, but make sure you include obstivles; e.g. Kidnapping, near death, accidental confession of love, love rivalry, family issues... Etc, this all serves to get the readers hoocked and makes for a better story, but dont forget its allways good to think outside the box ;) im sure youll think of something! Good luck! :D
Dancing-Souls chapter 13 . 3/7/2012
I don't really understand this system and how it decides the story ending but here it goes I want to vote anyway.
Reviewer chapter 13 . 3/4/2012
LeeSaku

Father

Happy
XxL0V3islik3aR0S3xX chapter 13 . 3/4/2012
1none of the above

2sister/brother

3happy
prince of the divine wolf chapter 13 . 3/4/2012
NARUHINA
duckie lover 151 chapter 2 . 3/4/2012
ooh... interesting twist at the end.

no offense, but I'm not a huge fan of your OC. I'm hoping he was supposed to get that reaction out of people...
duckie lover 151 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
It's interesting so far. :) I think they're all pretty much in-character, and I can't wait to see how the plot develops.
MauricetheBear chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Hope for more. Update please.
Dancing-Souls chapter 11 . 8/13/2011
Yuck norco thanks for explaining what that was!
Dancing-Souls chapter 10 . 8/13/2011
Awe great to know huh having good friends is important. :)
Dancing-Souls chapter 9 . 8/13/2011
Nice!
Chewie Cookies chapter 9 . 7/5/2011
Um, no offense, "Hinabi" should be "Hanabi", and "deicide" should be "decide". You seem to be making a lot of spelling errors...
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