Reviews for Lines of Control
Aleia Jade chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
"Or is she fine, just has worked too hard to draw lines that have become fences and then walls, and now there's no way over them?"

"Leaving her line intact, her control still absolute."

These two lines resonated with me. Really great work. It's so heartbreaking, but yet, it feels a realistic scenario for them.
celticmusebooks chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
I actually started watching this series because I liked your fics about it LOL.
corruptone chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Words can not express just how much I loved that.

Good job! :)
Elliesmeow chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
That's kinda sad. Becuase she seems to think that him taking her at her word and respecting her line makes her not as desirable as the others. When she should understand that he leaves the line intact becuase she's more imprtant than all of them.

Thanks for the fic, sorry I didn't get around to reading it earlier.:)
LeiLaure chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Very well captured... love how you used the line from the show.. :)
hotforteacher chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
My goodness, how heartbreaking! What a beautiful and insightful story!
StepFurther chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
liked it! it was awesome!
Nr.Six chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
WOW amazing story! I loved it. And it's said, but I could see this happening.
sexyscientist chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Wow! That was a really powerful story :) Loved it!
IndelibleInk14 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Awww! i thought the Leo bit was kinna sweet, but I luv this interpretation of it. actually, it probably is how it was meant, but ya know... itz me.
Rugbygirrl chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
So angsty and oh so good!
jojo140 chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Really good story. Hope you write more like this soon.
Introitus chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
Glorious. I love the show even more via your additions. Please keep writing these two!