Reviews for A Mirror Never Lies
MichelleKelly chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
...I have to say that was quite the interesting story...your spelling ought to be checked, so putting an un-betad label on it would help. There were some parts that didn't make much sense, in the first chapter PH removes his skirt, and then later he removes it again without mention of it being put back on, or maybe I missed something. I have to say that i'm extremely pleased with your graphic descriptions of the setting and events, it really puts you into the story and makes the silent hill universe really pop. A very amusing read.
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