|Reviews for As Far As Innocence Goes|
| ruueee24 chapter 2 . 9/3
aww I wish you continued this (T~T). I read The original one and I read this one too... Well I know life gets in the way and more important things happen that prevents one from writing. Well any way... good jobs on your stories
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2016
Continuez l'histoire putain les deux
| Liz Ben chapter 2 . 6/16/2016
When will this continue? This is marvellous. Please don't abandon it :)
| Hulkishpower chapter 2 . 3/7/2016
I feel like you could have just started a completely different story instead of rewriting an old one.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2016
Amazing! I can't wait for your next update! What will happen next? Will Itachi still be Jonin Instructor for Hinata? Will Hinata and Itachi meet in the next chapter? Please update soon! Your writing is incredible and all the characters are perfect! None are OOC! Love the xxxholic reference! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2016
I've just finished reading the Original As Far As Innocence and I love this story! I'm love this story so much! This seems really interesting! Please update soon!
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/15/2016
I think it's about time for an update. Pleaseeeeeee?
| Krishka chapter 2 . 2/5/2016
I have read the original and the new version, both are good. However it would be interesting to see if Utachu becomes the jonnin instructor of team 8 , how will Hinata fare if against Neji. Also how her increased power and determination (assuming last chapter of original as a precinct). However I do hope you include Romance as a genre apart from Drama and Adventure, as sadly speaking there is not much ItaHina out there in general and a good concept one to be specific.
Also generally speaking from my experience of reading loads and loads if Fanfics, I am assuming that something like Itachi going on a year long mission or Hinata going on year long medic-nin mission (as in tranquilwriter's possession) roughly around when Hina is 16-17 years, so that the Romance (fingers crossed) part could have some foundation
Also I have a recommendation that if you haven't already please to read Darth-Taisha's 'Not so subtle differences' and Tranquilwriters 'Divinity' , they are both really good ItaHina fics.
P.S. - It seems you haven't updated in quite a while, is there some genuine reason or you have abandoned the pic , though I'm hoping for the former.
Also pardon me for being carried away in a ridiculously long review. But rest assured your concept, the pairing and story writing skills are pretty good.
Have a good day :)
| TheEternallyElite chapter 2 . 12/8/2015
Where's the rest of this?
| Gguest chapter 2 . 12/4/2015
Please continue this story it's amazing!
| Guest101 chapter 2 . 12/1/2015
I have been a fan of Hinata Hyuuga for quite a while now; I admire her persona, character, shyness and determination to prove herself, among others. Out of all of the Naruto's characters, Itachi Uchiha is without a doubt one of the most complex yet beautifully character out there in the anime/manga world. Now Hinata and Itachi together brings another great perspective and level to great romance and hurt stories; being so similar yet very different, it is amazing how these two personas complement each other. Unfortunately there are not many stories dedicated to them and their romance. That is the reason why I was ecstatic when I found your story; "As Far As Innocence Goes." It is so rare to find a story that is both about your favorite characters (as main characters and ultimately couple) and has a beautiful plot along with grammar. That is why I am disappointing that you (for whatever reason) have decided or could no longer finish such story as you promised you would. I know it has been five years since you have updated but if you somehow end up reading this review, I just want to say that this is story is pure gold (amazing) and it would be a shame if you were to not complete. Thanks.
| reneelgarza0 chapter 2 . 11/19/2015
I have read both versions of this story and I believe that both have wonderful...I was just curious as to why stop midway in the story, only to start again and not continue? I do hope that there will be a continuation of this story.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/5/2015
Ahhhh, how I wish you'd continue UwU This rewrite is absolutely capturing! Ten times better than the first. You were so into Naruto's universe, politics, and characters. I looked forward to your personal explanations of character traits and situations. Oh, woe is me. But I hope you're doing well anyhow.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015
your story is noy bad. But next to your original hate it1 enough said.
| TheEternalRise chapter 2 . 7/24/2015
This is a very good story, sadly it's looks like you have stoped
I hope you find the inspitation to update this wonderful fic