Reviews for Broken |
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![]() ![]() Love that they call her baby girl they should just adopt her and love how protective they are |
![]() ![]() I think the truth line is great but the dialogue uses too much 'baby' in my opinion as a huge fan of law and order, it'll be very weird for olivia to say those words. But since you're the writer... It's still a good and sad stories though:)) |
![]() ![]() Excellent story! The ending left me hanging but in general it kept me on edge/wanting more. |
![]() ![]() Please write more this is a good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story I hopes you still complete them |
![]() ![]() ![]() I remember this episode a major part of your story is based on. good job and I will read on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww poor Lizzie I love this story update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it has been a while since you updated but i really really really like to know how this story goes further! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like this stoy alot poor lizzie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish that Casey & Olivia get help for Lizzie before she really gets worse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. |
![]() ![]() This story is soooo intense! i hope you keep writing! i love the whole casey/olivia thing! it makes alot of sense to me. lol. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is real intense but i love the story its well written can't wait to read more of it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ANOTHER CHAPTER 8DDDDD Ive Missed This Story Soo Much :c Awwww Lizzzy :c hurting herself, and now shes running away Please update sooon C8 and keeep up the awesomenesss work 8D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, heavy stuff. Poor Lizzie. :( I'm so glad you updated; this is really great work! Keep going with it! |