|Reviews for I See the Moon|
| Risa Dawn chapter 12 . 1/31
It was so beautiful! It was so beautiful I couldn't put it down and I am suppose to be cleaning my room!
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/12/2014
Such a beautiful fic...really. I just don't have words. Made me cry a lot too. Amazing and perfect. Really. Thank you.
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/31/2012
This was one of the best story and the most well written piece of work I have read in a long time. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for writing something that made me glad I read fanfiction.
| Lathena Mercion chapter 12 . 11/17/2010
Great story! I enjoyed it a lot.
| phyllis0016 chapter 12 . 9/15/2010
hey shan i liked this even if it was more dean than sam. why dont you write me a sammy one with a little loving in it and not wincest lol
| BeachDreamer chapter 11 . 8/22/2010
Ok girl. In a marathon session I read it. I read it all. Yes, all. All 11 chapters and the epi. Whew.
:) Did I love the slash. Not so much, but I adored the underlying story. Adored! Consequently I CAN NOT wait for you to finish your de-slashification process so I can read the "brotherly love" version. Dean and Isabella...*squee*! It made me all warm and fuzzy inside. And that Dean finally got some true mothering. *sniffle*. I just broke my heart that he had to lose the woman he loved. He so deserves to actually get to keep love. You know?
Anyway, not all of it was my cup of tea, but it was easy enough to skip through the overt stuff and enjoy the rest. Post soon! Please? :)
| blubblubblubblub chapter 12 . 7/13/2010
:) that was an great epilogue! really good atmosphere and i love it :))) hope to see new fanfiction from you! i'm really glad that you wrote this beautiful story... really one of the best stories i have read yet
| Amberdreams chapter 12 . 7/13/2010
Well, like you said, not everyone's cup of tea, and this particular domestic, non hunting kind of fic wouldn't normally be mine. If I'd come across it without reading your drabble first, I wouldn't have thought to tackle it, but there you go - I'd have missed out on a good sniffle.
I know this is AU and you neatly disposed of the YED in order to maintain the normal life for the remaining family, but of course that does still beg the question of the Apocalyptic storyline, doesn't it...!
Anyhow, I enjoyed it and think if you remove the slash element (which by the way was not at all essential to the main drive of the story) you may get a different audience next time. :D
| Amberdreams chapter 4 . 7/13/2010
I find I am craving some supernatural shennanigans (I always do when it comes to Sam and Dean), but that aside, this is a moving family story so far. Two things tickled me in this chapter in particular - first your little bit with Isabella saying grace was so similar to my drabble from this last week (great minds!) and second the story Liv was telling Sam about Dean and newborn Bella bonding - reminded me of this little snippet circulating on Facebook this week "I loved you the minute you were born, then I saw your face and fell in love, you were only a minute old but I knew I would die for you, and to this day I still would. This is the miracle of life. Put this on your status if you have children you love more than life xxxx " Do we believe in coincidences? :D
| blubblubblubblub chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
wow, great! can't wait for the sequel!
| Amberdreams chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
Ok, now I'm hooked, and wondering where you are going to take this AU idea...
Loved the exchange between Sam and John - the gradual connection that gets rebuilt (or I suppose in a way built for the first time) between them works really well and I especially liked the "Yeah." Sorry 'bout that.
"Yeah." Me too.
A Winchester apology at it's finest."!
| familydontendwithblood chapter 12 . 7/11/2010
This ending makes me so happy :) I'm so glad the boys get pretty close to that apple pie life; if anyone deserves it, they do.
John's death was sad, but at least he got his peace with avenging Mary and he knows his sons are ok.
It's good that Liv didn't find out everything, I had actually been thinking that would be a good way to tie up that loose end. By the way, I loved her throughout this story. She made me laugh this chapter especially with her comment about some of the best sex she ever had being on Jenna's first day of school :)
Isabella was just adorable throughout. I hope one day I have a kid as awesome as she is :)
I've enjoyed reading this very much, and I think you did an excellent job not only with writing in general, but also with writing Sam and Dean. Thank you for sharing your talent :)
| LS chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
I really liked your story. It was well developed and well written. And I love the idea of the brothers being soul mates, but I don't necessarily like that they'd want to sleep with each other. I think they can be everything to each other without that. What a fantastic way for Dean to get a normal life, I really don't know if it could happen any other way, he really would have to forget himself! All you characters were complex and interesting. Anyway, well done!
| Anna chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story. Your style of writing is simple, yet eloquent and I love the slow burn of the story rather than typical "sex" slash stories! Bravo! :)
| alwaysateen chapter 12 . 7/10/2010
Nice ending to a wonderful story.
I like to see them now knowing how they got there with their family and friends.
Dean was so lucky to have such an understanding family, Liv love him so much so it was certain she would welcome Sam with open arms but also Isabella, who's very bright and just like her daddy. I missed Spooky in this chapter, I hope he's still around to play with Isabella. :)
I have to admit that I jumped the parts that got to "slashy" sorry but it's really not my thing but I understand your choice.