|Reviews for Stargate: Dark Frontier 2x07 A Small Problems|
| MiiRsEnd chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
I enjoyed every chapter until this one. Everyone seems out of character and overly emotional. The situation didn't seem very fitting of the actions they are taking. The writing felt almost like a different author, someone a lot younger.
| marta chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
there's so much i coudl comment on, but i think you did a great job on this.
I'm worried about Sam/John, this wouldn't be hte first time you broke them up :(
but i'm SOOO happy for Chuck and Laura! :D OMG that was sooo perfect. It totally explains Chuck's crying earlier! he must have told Aleron and that's what got him! PERFECT.
Must. read. more. Write more! :D
| pbjt chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
The plan was awesome, and it's scary to think that alot more Olim died than Atlantis knows. The new marines must not be that well trained :P or they're just angry.
was i right in seeing that Ronon led the main team, and two people died from accidents, Aralus led teh second team and 40 olim were killed, and John's team killed 13?
Damn, even John can't keep control of them.
Overall a spectacular ending. Everyone's trying to deal with it and some are doing it better than others.
can't wait for the next episode.
| melissaadams22 chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
*Waves at you happily and offers you a cold frosty drink in a nice bright color with a little umbrella* Hotter than heck here right now on the East coast of the USA but your story was FANTASTIC. I loved it and you did a magnificent job, it was truly wonderful.
Thank you, thank you, thank you,
| CrystalKenobi chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
ch 4 and 5
Both chapters were tense there. For a while there you had me on the edge of my seat on how far Marks would go. The tension between Larrin and Marks I thought came across very well.
The action writing was very good. Not too much technical either just the right balance.
I'm beginning to think that at some point Aleron and Alicia just might end up being a little more than friends down the road. Thin line between love and hate they say.
I feel sorry in a way for Daniel, I bet he was wishing he was still on sg1 right about now.
Even though there are no scenes with sam and john together, you still manage to let us know that there is still tension between them in these 2 chapters, with other characters referenceing the fight. That tension between sam and alicia its got to blow up sometime. it really comes across very tight. Will this break john and sam even for just a little while still not clear, but I think they are stronger and will surive, its just what will they have to endure before that comes about is the question. its it possible an affair could happen, they break up and he goes to someone else for a while only to find out that he really does "love" sam and they get back together. I don't know but I'm looking forward to finding out. But I also see that Sam is working thru her "problem" with herself. It has to be hard because when you think about what all has happen to her that really noone but maybe daniel knows. lets see, there was joiner (the tokra), the mind stamp thing, the virus thing, the enity thing where she ended up in the computer, (I don't think she has told John about that one) So many things it could make one confused on who one is, I think in some ways that is part of what Aleron senses in her among other things like her feelings about earth and Jack (even though she is with john) and even her feelins about john themselves and what about her feelings about being a solider and a scientist. I really think in a way, we could end up her going to Dr. Carter down the road. Because I sense in between the lines in the last feww episodes, that she is really the most happiest when she is in the lab. and to be frank even on sg1, i think thats where is was happiest. I think Mia is going to be a big help in reminding her of that.
| Shadows-of-Realm chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
Looking good, my friend, real good! I loved the ending of this one. Dan left that note, I guess?
| aspeo chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
Great ending to a very good episode! I thought you did a great job describing the raid, and I was very happy that you showed Marks having the control to not deviate from the plan. I thought all the characters seemed to play out fairly true to form, and I was very interested in what will happen between Aleron and Alicia now that she knows his sister is her worst enemy. I still believe that Aquilina will eventually join with Atlantis, and Alicia will accept her, but I guess I'll have to wait and see, huh?
Also, they built their own drones! Awesome! I hope they work almost as well as the Ancients' drones do.
I can't wait to read the next episode!
| nano101 chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
Yeah i was a bit supriesed that it was so long
i liked the new drones :)
the subspace capacitor does have it drawbacks as u know unless u can stop the incoming rate of energy but the power levels would be on zpm scale :)
| SuperN-Gaspard chapter 5 . 7/7/2010
Nice; it's good to see the stuff with Chuck and Laura furthered. Mistake I found:
"...vaporized before evne hitting Daedalus..."
| melissaadams22 chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
*Dumps water over us* It's hotter than a firecracker today...geeze, hate htis time of year when it gets so hot and the humidity makes it unbearable to even move.
Took the chance to read your story though and it was GREAT, I LOVED it...ADORED it really and it's wonderful. *smiles happily*
Thank you, thank you, thank you.
| SuperN-Gaspard chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
Wow, not sure what to say. Bad things ahead though.
| pbjt chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
Whoa. Marks completely dominated Larrin. I feel like yelling "M-m-m-monster kill!"
I don't think he's going to blow the Olim away though. He would have just let Larrin do it.
Interesting plan, distract by attacking several planets, Daedalus forcing the ships to cover the planet instead of assisting the ground forces. Ronon and the teams marking out storage places. Nice.
So far so good but since when do things stay that way?
Very nice to see Atlantis finally striking back, even if it is reserved. I can't imagine what they'll be like when they finally go full scale war :D
| Shadows-of-Realm chapter 4 . 7/5/2010
Marks really can be rather dangerous when he's in a bad mood. I think that some Olim are going to pay...
| nano101 chapter 2 . 7/5/2010
I say longer and u do shorter?
| Rudy Pena chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
This is good, I like it. :)