|Reviews for Spare Moments|
| wanderlustnyc chapter 7 . 10/1/2018
Hi! I came upon your story years after your last update, so I hope all is well with you. You have a great fic going here. Well written and something that can keep your readers wanting more.
I like your characterizations of Pepper and Tony, and in this last chapter I think your romance and seduction is fine based on the pace and where you are at with your story. For me, you don't even have to write an all out intercourse scene. Your writing style doesn't seem to call for it. I mean, you have the romance and seduction going, but with the way you write (like with how you ended chapter 7), you can page break/thought break with just the insinuation that they're headed that way and it would make sense and not destroy the imagery.
I don't know if you are active elsewhere and continued this fic (like at you Tumblr account), but I do hope all is well with you and should you continue to receive notification from FFN, I hope this reaches you. I would love to continue reading this fic and see how it progresses. Should your muse and inspiration strike, I hope time and technology are your friends and you get the chance to update. Cheers!
| The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
haha this is such a cute story. you should update it!
| monalisamorocha chapter 7 . 1/17/2013
Why did you stop? WHY :(
| maddddds5 chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
omg I loved this so much! can't wait to see where it goes! pleeeeeaaaaaassseee write more soon!
| liine 95 chapter 7 . 4/12/2012
| Winteroses chapter 7 . 4/2/2012
Really really happy you updated:-) Loving Tony and Pepper's vaction:-) Please update soon!
| socalmaggot chapter 7 . 1/20/2012
well im addicted and damn proud to be! amazing story your writing! please update soon!
| fantasia-49 chapter 7 . 1/9/2012
oh excellent really and i can't wait to read more of it
| Wonderwomanbatmanfan chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
This is really good. Please update soon :D
| StarkObsessed chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
Ive just read this story twice, and I must say, it is now residing in my top 5 Favorites! I absolutely love this, and I can picture the two of them perfectly! The characters are spot in and it is so funny! I like the view into each of their minds as well. Its exactly how Id picture them to think. Fantastic, and I cant wait for the next update! :D
| HeartoSteel chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
This story is awesome. I don't know how I missed this one. I love the way you right them and their voices are so spot on. You write them 'normal' if I may say. Very refreshing. Please update soon.
| anonymous reader chapter 6 . 8/2/2010
i love this fic, please continue
| anarchist-dog-owner chapter 6 . 7/31/2010
This is great! You write both of their characters faithfully to RDJ and GP's portrayals. I love it! Please continue!
| Nat D chapter 6 . 7/26/2010
I sutbled into this two days ago.
Do go on. It's great!
Desert -and private! - island with Tony. Man, the things I wouldn't do.
| Skye chapter 6 . 7/18/2010
Too good. Let me tell you that the
hard work paid off. I can't wait for
the Part II!