Reviews for Never Broken
christyarchuleta0 chapter 11 . 6/8/2017
You should continue the story.
christyarchuleta0 chapter 12 . 6/8/2017
I love this story it is super cute.
kurifu gari chapter 12 . 4/15/2015
is there gonna be perhaps a sequel to this story ? I really hope so
kufq2akzenblihopLK chapter 12 . 8/7/2014
HAHAHA The last part was nothing short of awesome. Why's Tum Tum always too slow XD But all in all this was a good story. Can't wait to read the sequel! Wooho!
kufq2akzenblihopLK chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
I absolutely LOVE this chapter! From the very beginning, the way you described the scenery was so artistic and you know, I felt I could just see everything that was going on. Hahaha It's awesome. Wonder if I've read this fic before though o.o In any case, definitely going to my favourite. I know it sounds kind of funny considering I've only read the first chapter, but oh well, its exciting to see what happens next anyways XD
Fansquealing chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
This story needs to be acknowledged by more reviews, just saying. It deserves them as does it's writer! :D

Brilliantly written; u got their characters down magnificently! xD
Ninja lover chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
Great set-up chapter.

I can see this happening in a 3 Ninjas movie for sure. A car wash and they're all goofing off... basically a lighthearted scene before the action! The guys' reactions to the girls, Tum Tum getting soaked by the hose, the bad guys watching from the car... all good stuff.

So I definitely noticed that Colt and River were missing from when they were counting the money. When I first read this, I thought they were making out somewhere. What was I thinking! Well, I was obviously wrong. LOL!
Ninja lover chapter 7 . 3/1/2014
Great chapter. The twins cracked me up here; you can definitely see their unique relationship and they play off each other well. Oh, and River has a bit of a temper! But she shut up when Rocky spoke up. It looks like Jet can calm her down, too, but at the same time, he knows his place. I think you found a good balance with your OCs... here, you've proven that they're not, dare I say it, 'Mary Sue or Gary Stu-ish'.

Anyway, cool dynamic you got here between the characters. You've got a knack for writing conversation.

I can definitely see why Peter did what he did. So how old is he? College-age or maybe older? I'm curious how Jet and River know the guy. My imagination is running wild here. LOL.
Ninja lover chapter 6 . 2/28/2014
Call me a sap, but my favorite part of this chapter was the kiss! LOL. That was so... unexpected. But oh-so-good. I didn't think River had it in her. I saw a little bit more of her personality here. She's bold, knows what she wants, and just... goes for it. GO girl!

Just to comment on your A/N. You said you weren't a fight choreographer! LOL. At least you're honest! But me personally, I didn't mind that bit. You left enough detail so the readers can still understand what's going on. Too much detail could be distracting.

And yes, Tum Tum. You look for trouble AND trouble finds you. You're the 3 Ninjas, duh! LOL.
Ninja lover chapter 5 . 2/28/2014
Alright, alright. I just want to let you know that I have read this entire story since my last review. I realize that I didn't leave a single review since Chapter 4 because I really wanted to get through it. SORRY! I will leave my two cents from here on out. AND just to let you know, I LOVED IT!

So I love how you set this up. Sneaking into the warehouse by jumping into boxes... seems like a typical Rocky plan, which is pure genius, of course! Oh, Tum Tum. You crack me up. It's just like him to be picky about a BOX. LOL. And Colt 'splinter on the ass'... that's when I lost it. This chapter just had way too moments. Too good.

P.S. I also noticed that you completed Part Deux. I like reading completed stories because I'm really REALLY impatient. All the more reason to review this one so I can start that one! I'm curious to see where you took this and your characters.
Tessy3 chapter 3 . 9/24/2013
OH, MY GOD! Nell, this was amazing! I loooved it from the very beginning. Love their reactions when they had to wake up that early. Youre a wonderful writer. Im enjoying this too much. Thanks for this story. Im going to keep Reading.

Ninja lover chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
Another great chapter. The Sandwich Shack sounds like a cool place; I wish I had someplace like that to hang out at! Anyway, I like how you set your story up for some action. So Jet and River know a guy... And this guy gets into some trouble... And this guy is now the target of the bad guy...

Where does Rocky, Colt, and Tum Tum fit into all of this? They just HAPPEN to befriend Jet and River so of course, they get thrown into action, too! It would never happen in real life, but that is exactly what made the 3 Ninjas such a fun classic. Deal with it, you guys. The mere fact that you are capable of kicking butt will make you prone for trouble! Hilarious.

And OF COURSE, Colt and River. Yes, you made that predictable. And no, I don't care. I know you threw that in for the romantics. I love it. They are simply adorbs.

Sooo... I'm going to read the next couple of chapters now. I'm glad this story is already complete. I can't imagine waiting for an update! That would be torture. LOL.
Ninja lover chapter 3 . 8/28/2013
This is my favorite chapter so far. Granted, I'm only on the third chapter! I just love the boys' relationship with Grandpa.

I remember those morning tests were always so silly (like an egg to the face). It would make sense that Grandpa would go to this extreme at the end of their ninja training.

I see some Colt/OC romance foreshadowing in this. I'm excited to see where you go with this!

Also, I see that you made them older. It's safe to assume that these events happen after all the movies then...

This was written flawlessly. Well done.
nellsss chapter 12 . 8/26/2013
To Ninja lover: I wish I could PM you, but you're reading as a guest, and I really wanted to reply to your reviews. This was the only way I could think of! Lol. :)

So THANK YOU. Your kind words & constructive criticisms are exactly why I enjoy writing! I appreciate them so much!

As a fan, I wanted to explore this world (the 3 Ninjas world)... but somehow stir whatever creative juices I have & create something new (e.g. OCs. New villain.) without losing what everyone loved about the original 3 Ninjas. I was apprehensive to do this, however, because I feel like anything new gets judged the most. So it makes me really happy that the overall reception has been positive! :)

Anyway, hope you get a chance to see this! Again, lots of thanks! Happy reading! :)
Ninja lover chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
This just keeps getting better and better.

Just thought I would comment on your OCs which you introduced here. Jet and River. Twin ninjas. How much cooler can you get! I'm glad you explained their persona and why/how they got their ninja names. Good intro to the characters, esp OCs. Some writers create OCs and never set up them up for their development. Here, you do. You introduced their situation (they're Grandpa's other students) and briefly, their personalities (ninja names). Major kudos.

Also, you gave us a new villain. That's not easy to do. If I wasn't intrigued and impressed before (I was), I definitely am now!
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