This was an excellent story. I highly recommend it. There are not many fan fics that center around the Chunin exams that I like because they are never far enough away from the OC to be interesting but this was amazing and it is a true what if as the personalities and actions of the characters are the same yet with one change the whole story changes.

me over here thinking that with the amount of chakra naruto has with those knives that all hinata need to do is aim and bam perfect assassin trio lee for major ground cover

I was so hoping to not see the Wave mission. It shows a complete lack of originality.

I wonder why the Anbu would just leave orochimaru's body in the forest. They didn't take it or burn it or anything like they're supposed to, just left it there for someone to come along and grab it. Pretty stupid move

Glad to see Hinata making use of her bow and arrow. Canon hyuuga waste their Byakugan on cqc instead of using any range jutsu/weapons even though they can see miles away through objects etc.

I wonder why Kabuto did that, guess I'll see later

I like that Zabuza and Haku actually play a role in the story after coming to Konoha. Most fics just have them in the background only to be mentioned occasionally. Also for the 1st exam I wonder why nobody thought to just break a window/wall and go to the ground floor, the only requirement was to reach the bottom floor in 10 minutes but everyone just went through the traps and stuff. I guess it's possible they would've been disqualified but I doubt it

Waiter! Waiter! More pointless, incredibly inaccurate and absolutely stupid character bashing, please!
And you were doing so well...

The fight between Hinata and Hiashi is so cringe that it physically hurt me to read it. Otherwise, not a bad fanfic.

It's not funny.

I dunno. The story is kinda sad. With how stupid the MC is.

I am sure there will be people liking this. But... ugh.

dude good improvisation with the Sherlock Holmes fight sequence

So you take away one of Hinata big achievements from her, she is the one who created the Lion First thing.

Why did you have to kill Gaara?
I really liked his portrayal in Shippuden...

I love it!

The Great Bridge of Unity?
I really liked the Great Naruto Bridge, but this works too.
Certainly better than my idea of calling it the Great Youthful Bridge lol!