Reviews for Geniuses of Hard Work |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH LEE! That Sherlock bit actually works well for Lee. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh. Well, I hate to say it, but I'm done. This is definitely one of the better stories I've seen lately, especially when it come to grammar mechanics. That said, if I wanted a story where Naruto remains ignorant and stunted I'd watch canon. It makes no sense that Guy wouldn't tell him about the shadow clone training method and I don't believe he wouldn't know. Also, you've nerfed Naruto and Lee too much for my taste. So.. brilliant canon, but the executing was lacking in my opinion. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see that you did your best here. The fight was well written, but I still hated it. Lee should be able to perceive Haku moving because he can also move that fast. He would run into things if he couldn't. You made him look weak and Haku far too op. And i don't care about the fox's chakra, Naruto's natural healing should've taken care of him. I'm sorry, but this was just poor. What's worse is that Naruto isn't excelling with Guy like he should. You're crippling him for your story. You're a talented writer and this story has potential but so far it's pretty bad |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn I'm no fan of Sakura but that "retarded" line was very OOC imo. Otherwise another fun chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yosh! You said the name of the thing at the end of the thing! So Youthful! Such a great story... I read it about once a year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! Definetley one of the best naruto fics I've read by far! Keep it up your a gifted writer! That NineNine joke was one of the funniest I've read in a fic. Laughed for ages! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH NARUTO JUST VIOLATED TENTEN WITH THE NINENINE JOKE |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story though the exams aren't the only way to get promoted. After all they have thousands of ninjas and if the only way to get promoted was the exam then they would have a crap load of Genins |
![]() ![]() Great story enjoyed from start to finish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolute masterpiece lol binged the whole story in about 2 days |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was digging this story but the plot holes are really starting to grind my gears. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so wholesome a, |
![]() ![]() such a good story. Liked how you weaved it together. |
![]() ![]() wow, Kabuto help kill the snake? |