such a good story. Liked how you weaved it together.

wow, Kabuto help kill the snake?

no Anko for the forest of death?

this was a cute chapter.

looks like an interesting story.

Perfect. Nice job

Ninenine?! Ninenine!? This is the funniest thing ever put to paper. Nice job

Haven’t started reading yet but first impressions are that this is gonna be a new top ten. We will see.

nice

This chapter showed quite the nice butterfly effect/ consequences Haku and zabuza joining the leaf or orochimaru dying early is cliché at this point but this was quite new!

Nice chapter though orochimaru beeing this angry feels kind of out of character, also I believe opening the seventh gate turns the green Chakra into blue vapor.
The twist at the end with kabuto was also nice.

Naruto the BLONDE uzumaki calling out a byakugan-less hyuuga is kind of funny

While the wave arc has been told thousands of times already, I think that this one was one of the better versions

The story was good/great up until the point you made kabuto the main villain. You did nothing to develop him as a character and his actions are so far removed from canon that he may as well be an OC. Because of this it is impossible for the reader to infer his motivations.

This split causes the entire story to just become unbelievable. What was once an enjoyable read has now just become an exercise of pointless frustration. How is the reader supposed to accept that the village just decides to lay down and do nothing to try and stop kabuto. You spent so much time establishing that Haku can use his abilities to see and hear everything that happened in the forest of death, only to hand wave that information away to magically allow an invasion.

You literally have Suna confess to being in league with Oto and send repatriation, but yet Kabuto an established leaf nin is allowed to walk away and turn traitor? It’s insane to think that your readers will make that jump with you. In fact it’s so insane that you literally tell the reader the exact opposite should happen.

You directly portray the leaf as the strongest of the villages in your story. You show multiple instances of the hokage having insane insight into the mindset of many ninja. You even establish an expectation for the leaf to have been watching kabuto knowing he is planning something, but the best they can do is be caught flat footed and pitifully search for him?

If only a key component of your story was a clan of people that have magical eyes that can literally see kilometers around themselves and track people…

Also what about jiraiya? We know that he literally spends much of his time tracking his traitor team mate, but he never shows up after his death? There’s just so many unexplained universe plot holes at this point that reading further is pointless.

I'm surprised that Hayate had no reaction to Kabuto pretending to be the same anbu that his girlfriend is