Right.. Kabuto is just going around killing/fucking everyone up and no one has noticed yet? Fuck off.

Right... because 12 year olds can fight off the Kyuubi and fuck with Naruto's seal.. What utter dog shit lmao

Excellent chapter

The premise was great. But as the plot progressed things became more and more boring or frustratingly .. canon-like, while not everything still unrealistically too many things go well for the MC&Co /Konoha.

what's interesting is the contrast between guy and kakashi is made bluntly obvious and it's wonderful to see. kashi in all honesty is lazy as hell and tardy and even in canon he has no excuse for focusing so much more on sasuke than his other students. on the other hand guy puts in 100 times as much effort into things and arrives on time to things. I really like the dynamics of the characters. I mean noting that Lee and naruto are both orphans and how they all kinda have their own issues going on is great writing. as characters bringing them together like this is very clever cause they actually fit nicely.

This is incredible. I truly loved this story! Once I started reading, I couldn't stop! If Naruto had to be rewritten, this would've been a wonderful version.
There may have been typos here and there, but nothing too glaring that disrupted the story flow. I love the development here for the characters and that you retained or didn't kill off the people who died in the original story like Haku, Zabuza, and Hiruzen. But I also love that you had no hesitation in killing off characters here too, like what you did for Gaara.
Team Guy here was so badass, I know Naruto and Lee wouldn't have any issues when it comes to being put in the same team, but having Hinata added to the mix was very interesting to see. And she was so incredible here, I really love her character in this story. Plus, NaruHina brings me life!
The results of the bet was expected. It was funny, but in a way, still fulfilling. Despite how simple the bet may seem, it brought about a whole journey that was life-changing and made them grow to be better people, especially for the members of Team Guy.
This was really fun to read and is definitely one of my fave Naruto fanfics. Great job!

What's with the over-explaining? I don't know about you, but it's kinda unnecessary.

Nice chapter.

Of course, it's "interesting" that Naruto wasn't thrown out of that restaurant because of the Kyuubi.

I'm guessing you had to make it like he wasn't thrown out to advance the plot, otherwise they'd be stuck going to Ichiraku's on every date. lol

"Great Bridge of Unity"

Sounds a lot better than "The Great Naruto Bridge"

Ummm...the rationale that Gatou was the one who "killed" Naruto when it was Haku who delivered the supposedly-lethal blow, is silly.

While he was Zabuza's "Employer", it was Haku who just about killed Naruto.

Now they're all "Let's forget all about what Haku almost do and move on"?

eh whatever. Naruto is alive so at least there is some explanation as to why there would no longer be any grudge going forward.

honestly, would have been funny af if when Naruto went "Completely still" if he went into safe mode

This is one of the best FF I've ever read! Damn this one needs more reviews! I bet if the Naruto's sensei was Guy instead of Kakashi, Naruto would've been a badass character just like the one you described in this fic. Thanks for creating this story!

I guess this is the chapter I would stop reading more cause I just find it unbearable for a village to brush off suna oto invasion just because they wanted to see what kabuto would do even after seeing him do reanimation jutsu.

I don't think it's worth the life's lost due to that plot and it's really bad that Naruto and Lee being selfish knowing about the recent update of invasion from Haku. Anyways I hope this fic has a good ending or you gave a summary of the story atleast. Thanks for the fic.

Not sure if you'll even get this, but I loved this so much, I read it in two days in between work.
The drama, the action, the subtle romance; the epic development!
This was a great story. Thank you for taking the time to write it way back when!

-Z

This was so beautiful and an Amazing fanfiction that captures the spirit of Naruto, is true to the characters for the most part,and doesn't try to go over the top or bash on certain characters. This is my favorite fanfiction of Narutoverse! Thank you