|Reviews for Star Trek: Constance|
| USSStargazer chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
First of all-thanks for reviewing my story. I'm aware that the script-format makes it a little tricky, and I appreciate you reading it!
Secondly, I like the premise of this. I like the characters, I like the action, and I like the plot. But I think there's a little too much of both. I find it a little hard to keep track of all the characters and what's going on because it's VERY fast paced. To solve that, you might try taking time to introduce each character with a little more detail, limit the characters in the scene to stop confusion, and maybe take a little longer to describe what's happening?
But so far, I really do enjoy it, and I look forward to more. Thanks again.
| Scar211 chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
Good Chapter, the Fenarans seem like an interesting bunch of people. I look forward to seeing the Cardasisans and the other threat in your next chapter.
| Scar211 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
Good Chapter you've got going and a good main character. I look forward to seeing this progress.