|Reviews for The Untold Story Unbeautiful|
| Heartless'World chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
The story line is amazing. But you had sentence errors. :] But still amazing ... amazing .. and interesting
| Bratty McHawt chapter 16 . 12/16/2011
buh-bye writer! :( i wish u weren't back!
| ChickFlickLover1 chapter 15 . 12/16/2011
okay, i honestly dont want to sound trashy, but...this story kind of sucks. it sucks because the grammar's horrible, the plot's way too similar to my fav fanfic story, and it seems like you have nooo energggggie twoooo wrhite currently...(you have no engery to write correctly. please check everything you have then post.
| milaCole chapter 16 . 12/8/2011
ithinkyou should continue the storywith tyler and abby...i satupfor a good hour and read your story! your really good
| beck-iibabe chapter 16 . 6/8/2011
The plot of ur story is good but u really need to work on ur spelling because it makes the story hard to read
| Same person as below chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Just read on... LIVE OR LIFE?
HEARD OR HARD?
GET SOME GRAMAMR.
| AN ANNOYED VIEWER chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Okay, first off, A LOAD OF MISTAKES.
Mental? Or medal? Would you like a medal or cookie?
Medal sounds better.
Often or offend? Do you often come to school on a Saturday?
'I tpyed his number into her cell, and lays back onto my bed'
If your doing it it's MY, not HER. And type properly.
Overall, the plot is good. Just check your grammar before you post.
| Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 14 . 12/27/2010
I wonder wTt tyler's speech is going too be about
Love this story keep on writing how are things
Going too come
Out Witt him and Abby?
| Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 15 . 12/27/2010
I love how the end turned out to be can nott wait for a continued story maybe
Love the ending
| Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 16 . 12/27/2010
Heyy okayy here the deal read this story and
Thought it was great hope yuh gett too update
When yuh can and I liked all three I've seen yuh
Have written teen mom already and by the way love itt
But I wish yuh made another story and kept on writing like the continued story of Tyler and abbY please that would be really
Nice please think about it
Sincerely this lovrrgurll
| rozaveRnB chapter 16 . 11/16/2010
I LOVE ITT ALL THREE PLLEEEAAAEEESSEEE t
They sound really goode CONTINUE please
I kno there all gona turn out too be good:)
| rozaveRnB chapter 15 . 11/11/2010
i LOVE itt glad i read this story soooo much
hope you gett too write another flirt series fan fic :) :D
your really goode att writing onrinue
what you do and dont stop
| rozaveRnB chapter 13 . 10/31/2010
Like itt a lot wish yuu could update sooner ... But keep on the good work and continue writing:) :D
| rozaveRnB chapter 12 . 10/21/2010
ILOVE ITT UPDATE AS SOON AS YUU CAN CAN NOTT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TOO COME:)
| rozaveRnB chapter 11 . 10/16/2010
LOVE ITT LOVE LOVE ITTTTTTTT :) :D can nott wait for the next chapter to come and for yuu too update :) :D