Reviews for The Untold Story Unbeautiful
Heartless'World chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
The story line is amazing. But you had sentence errors. :] But still amazing ... amazing .. and interesting
Bratty McHawt chapter 16 . 12/16/2011
buh-bye writer! :( i wish u weren't back!
ChickFlickLover1 chapter 15 . 12/16/2011
okay, i honestly dont want to sound trashy, but...this story kind of sucks. it sucks because the grammar's horrible, the plot's way too similar to my fav fanfic story, and it seems like you have nooo energggggie twoooo wrhite currently...(you have no engery to write correctly. please check everything you have then post.
milaCole chapter 16 . 12/8/2011
ithinkyou should continue the storywith tyler and abby...i satupfor a good hour and read your story! your really good
beck-iibabe chapter 16 . 6/8/2011
The plot of ur story is good but u really need to work on ur spelling because it makes the story hard to read
Same person as below chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Just read on... LIVE OR LIFE?

LIVE.

HEARD OR HARD?

HARD.

GET SOME GRAMAMR.
AN ANNOYED VIEWER chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Okay, first off, A LOAD OF MISTAKES.

Mental? Or medal? Would you like a medal or cookie?

Medal sounds better.

Often or offend? Do you often come to school on a Saturday?

OFTEN.

'I tpyed his number into her cell, and lays back onto my bed'

If your doing it it's MY, not HER. And type properly.

*Lays

Overall, the plot is good. Just check your grammar before you post.
Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 14 . 12/27/2010
I wonder wTt tyler's speech is going too be about

Love this story keep on writing how are things

Going too come

Out Witt him and Abby?
Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 15 . 12/27/2010
I love how the end turned out to be can nott wait for a continued story maybe

Love the ending
Lovrrgurll2dayy chapter 16 . 12/27/2010
Heyy okayy here the deal read this story and

Thought it was great hope yuh gett too update

When yuh can and I liked all three I've seen yuh

Have written teen mom already and by the way love itt

But I wish yuh made another story and kept on writing like the continued story of Tyler and abbY please that would be really

Nice please think about it

Sincerely this lovrrgurll
rozaveRnB chapter 16 . 11/16/2010
I LOVE ITT ALL THREE PLLEEEAAAEEESSEEE t

They sound really goode CONTINUE please

I kno there all gona turn out too be good:)

-rozave
rozaveRnB chapter 15 . 11/11/2010
i LOVE itt glad i read this story soooo much

hope you gett too write another flirt series fan fic :) :D

your really goode att writing onrinue

what you do and dont stop

-rozave
rozaveRnB chapter 13 . 10/31/2010
Like itt a lot wish yuu could update sooner ... But keep on the good work and continue writing:) :D

-rozave
rozaveRnB chapter 12 . 10/21/2010
ILOVE ITT UPDATE AS SOON AS YUU CAN CAN NOTT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER TOO COME:)

-rozave
rozaveRnB chapter 11 . 10/16/2010
LOVE ITT LOVE LOVE ITTTTTTTT :) :D can nott wait for the next chapter to come and for yuu too update :) :D

-rozave
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