|Reviews for Tag, you're it!|
| Deborahpflover chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Great! Didn't expect that. XD
| Silver Moon Huntress chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
I was scared for a second...
| austin96 chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
I like it its simple and kind of cool good job
| Cordria chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Neat little story. It's always fun to play tag and you got a very unique little twist to turn 'running down the alley' into a game of tag! Smart. :)
I loved how you kept the identity of 'she' a mystery until the end of this. It's fun, as a reader, to try to puzzle out who the main character of a story is. That mystery keeps a lot of people reading past when they might normally have quit - really good job on your part!
My only wish is that it were a little longer... :) I got into it! But perhaps it being short is what you wanted. Short and sweet and simple. There is some element of awesome to that.
Fun, fun plot. Creative and humorous, pulling into two very well characterized half-ghosts as well! Just as all-around excellently done short piece. It was VERY good!
Keep up the really awesome work. :D
| Echoheart chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
This was cute I really liked it. Some Danny x Dani bonding 3
| lalaland007 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
| DPgirl2323 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I like it...
| Kixen chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Nice story. Poor Dani though at the same time she should have sensed him with her ghost sense even if he was invisible.