Reviews for Right In Front Of You
cherryblossom1031 chapter 11 . 7/12/2010
how sweet! cant waait for the next chappie! as soon as i got on the computer, i was scrolling thorugh the page, trin to find out if u updated, and i did dat every hour! update soon:)
Madlenita chapter 10 . 7/12/2010
You need a motivate? In my opinion your story is very good, so i hope when you finnishes this story you write next...
Madlenita chapter 9 . 7/12/2010
A quick broke up... But i get it, so ther will by at last 2 chapters?
cherryblossom1031 chapter 10 . 7/11/2010
luv the chappie! update soon:)
chollie forever chapter 10 . 7/10/2010
you can do it yes you can if you can't do it nobody can!
jmmjlr12 chapter 10 . 7/10/2010
I have one thing to say...Chloe shouldn't give in so easy. Also, Chloe should have a big secret from Oliver. Otherwise, the story is heading in the right direction.
kim chapter 10 . 7/10/2010
that was pretty slick... next update please ...:)
DonStella chapter 9 . 7/10/2010
Good chapter. Like that that they are not together any more. Also like that oliver is going to try and win chloe's love.
cherryblossom1031 chapter 9 . 7/9/2010
im happy they broke up! cant wait for the next chappie! update soon:)
Madlenita chapter 8 . 7/9/2010
Thanks for another chapter, reaction Chloe, very reasonable...
cherryblossom1031 chapter 8 . 7/8/2010
im really starting to hate jimmy now! luv the chappie and story! update soon:)
Kim chapter 8 . 7/7/2010
I loved it...
DonStella chapter 8 . 7/7/2010
sorry i just got to your storry. love it i just love oliver and chloe together. keep going with it your doing a good job.
whatweareafreaidof chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
This story is good, like that oliver is scaried to tell chloe the truth.

I hate the jimmy bashing, jimmy did every think in his power to make chloe happy, and risk his life for her, he willing died for her... he is as much of a hero as oliver if not more...

Look haveing chloe love oliver. Is great, but the. Jimmy a geek and not good enought. Is just mean. Look at from a nother point of view, clark. Dating a girl, and his friends tell her. She not good enought for him becouse. She plain. Looking

Great story, just gaveing you my opion

Keep writing
cherryblossom1031 chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
ollie's gonna confess! cant wait for the next chappie! update soon:)
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