Reviews for Right In Front Of You
Madlenita chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
So Oliver planing talk to Chloe... I cant wait, it will by very interesting chapter...

Więc liver planuje porozmawiać z Chloe... Nie mogę się doczekać, to będzie bardzo ineteresujący rozdział...
SuNgLaSsEs-ChI'c chapter 7 . 7/7/2010
You leave me there! How could you do such a thing?:(

Loved the update(s), and the whole story itself. Can't wait for more!
Kim chapter 7 . 7/6/2010
great series. love it. can't wait for the other three soon. :)
dreamiedreamer chapter 6 . 7/6/2010
'Tall, dumb and oblivious' brilliant line.
IONUIN chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
YAY Ollie finally saw the light its about time I can't wait to see Oliver wooing chloe away but i also hope that she gave him a run for his money she deserve to be fought for and i think our clueless billonaire has a lot to make up for

excellent chapter more soon pretty please
cherryblossom1031 chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
awesome chappie! luv it, and keep up the great work! update soon:)
Madlenita chapter 6 . 7/5/2010
Wow, 3 days and 4 new chapters... Thanks for this, you are amaizing writer.
cherryblossom1031 chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
that my friend is called karma! chlpoe felt jealousy and pained cuz of ollie, and now ollis fellin it! luv the chappie! update soon:)
SuNgLaSsEs-ChI'c chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
Stupid, she's in love with you too!

Great update, can't wait for more!
dreamiedreamer chapter 5 . 7/4/2010
Finally Ollie realized that he'd fallen in love with Chloe but Chloe on the other hand was trying to get over him. This is going to be interesting.
AJ chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
Great update, I love seeing Ollie get jealous. I'm so glad you're updating daily! Keep up the good work. I hope this story goes on much longer :)
cherryblossom1031 chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
well then...looks like ollies jealous! luv the chappie! please update soon:)
chlollie forever chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
please don't stop writing this story! its really good.
annacat chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
love your story. Really like how you have done jimmy as well, a fresh young guy with no other motives than he likes her . Ollie better step up his game! Next bit please?
ionuin chapter 4 . 7/3/2010
oh ollie could he be more clueless you're jealous sweetie you better realize soon or you'll lose chloe but i have to say again please it doesn't have to be jimmy maybe davis or even bruce wayne would be great for chloe jimmy its justs to safe and boring like ollie said

anyway great chapter ud soon please
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