Reviews for Be Mine
KarenAnn4 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Loved it! Wonderful plot, realistic, and so funny! But my absolute favorite part? A geeky, shy, and sweet Rosalie? Very nice change!
Babette12 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
I laughed and cried at this! Oh, the horrors of high school that burn into our brains and stick with us, even 25 years later! And I loved my time there...not that I would want to go back, mind you.

I loved the image of Rose going from nerd to beauty queen. I know the glasses are still there, but it's easy to imagine what happens when she fully grows up. Emmett will be one very happy boy.

Ah, Bella and Edward. They were so cute. I'm sure Edward expected her to figure it out sooner, especially with the green note paper. I wouldn't be surprised if he was a bit hurt by her rejection earlier in their freshman year, but probably understood he was only talking to her to get something, or had it explained by Esme. Did he see her furtive looks? Did Alice watch and report Bella's obsession? Bella was still friends with Jasper, did he notice and pass on the information? I'm sure the encouragement went both ways.

I would love to see more as well with this story, if you are able. I think them walking back into the dance, hand in hand, would be a hoot, followed by them going through graduation, still together. I'd imagine Lauren telling Bella that she was the flavor of the month, but this Bella is strong enough to put her in her place. Then on to college, where they keep in touch. Of course, even if you don't, it's easy to imagine what would happen.

Thanks for the fun one-shot (which hopefully will become a 2 or 3 shot)! Looking forward to more Elemental when you have time. xoxo!
brown0520 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
this was a very cute story, it really took guts on both of their parts to put themselves out there like that, i loved it great job, it was innocent and terribly sweet, i would love to read a few more chapters of this sometime
Natasha37 chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
i really like this short story ;)

for me the ending is a little bit too fast, it would be great if you cold expand it...

btw, can't wait for another ch of Elemental ;)))
CocoaSampson chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
This was a funny and sweet little diddy. I laughed when Iread the description of Rosalie. I don't think I've ever come across her being described anything resembling a nerd/geek. It was pretty funny to envision. Edward was really sweet at the end, which I loved. I liked this a lot.
barbarito chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Loved it
dinotopian chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Thanks! You are such an excellent writer, I really enjoyed reading this - although I have to confess, when I saw your name in the subject line of the e-mail, my heart beat a little faster at the thought of an elemental update. Thanks again, and I hope you have enjoyed your diversion - I know I did!
FanFicZareefe chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Great story and well written. :)
fletchmartin chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Sweet story! And yes, I would definitely love to read more on these two.
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
really liked this story...hope you decide to continue...:)
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I really liked it. I loved Bella and her no nonsense, take no prisoners attitude, but please finish Elemental first. I would like to know more about Edward. What finally made him go back and look at Bella? Did her mom know it was Edward? Did she talk to Esme? What happened to all the Skanks Edward was with and why did they leave him? Thanks.
claireoth chapter 1 . 6/30/2010

I was so happy to see this in my inbox! I desperately need the pick me up after my self imposed Eclipse exile!

I loved it, such a sweet story!

Thank you for brightening my day honey!


Elegantly Simple chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
really good beginning and middle... but the ending was lacking ALOT

i really enjoyed your story but the ending just killed it for me. i didn't like the way edward and bella got together, at all. it seemed rushed and everything bella felt from the past 4 years felt like a joke. i believe she took back edward to soon and too fast and on edward's part, i think his declaration/effort was insincere. i would have thought bella would have screamed, thrashed, caused mayhem before she took back edward.

you have a lot of potenial and your story was amazing... but i just think the ending needs a bit of fine tuning [ok alot... but you get what i mean, right?]
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Love it. I like the ending but would love to read more. :)
gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
That was a cute o/s!

Love it

Thanks Ms.T! *hugs*

Hope you enjoy Eclipse!
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