Reviews for Be Mine
FanFicZareefe chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Great story and well written. :)
fletchmartin chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Sweet story! And yes, I would definitely love to read more on these two.
maggiejoma chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
really liked this story...hope you decide to continue...:)
MDtwiwriter chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I really liked it. I loved Bella and her no nonsense, take no prisoners attitude, but please finish Elemental first. I would like to know more about Edward. What finally made him go back and look at Bella? Did her mom know it was Edward? Did she talk to Esme? What happened to all the Skanks Edward was with and why did they leave him? Thanks.
claireoth chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
::SQUEES::

I was so happy to see this in my inbox! I desperately need the pick me up after my self imposed Eclipse exile!

I loved it, such a sweet story!

Thank you for brightening my day honey!

333

xxx
Elegantly Simple chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
really good beginning and middle... but the ending was lacking ALOT

i really enjoyed your story but the ending just killed it for me. i didn't like the way edward and bella got together, at all. it seemed rushed and everything bella felt from the past 4 years felt like a joke. i believe she took back edward to soon and too fast and on edward's part, i think his declaration/effort was insincere. i would have thought bella would have screamed, thrashed, caused mayhem before she took back edward.

you have a lot of potenial and your story was amazing... but i just think the ending needs a bit of fine tuning [ok alot... but you get what i mean, right?]
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Love it. I like the ending but would love to read more. :)
gossip-bangkok chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
That was a cute o/s!

Love it

Thanks Ms.T! *hugs*

Hope you enjoy Eclipse!
Wine and Cheesy chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Such a sweet story! Love this attitude Bella. If you ever expand on this, would be great to see happened to make Bella so jaded.
FrauleinShannon chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Your characters were so different... especially your Rosalie and that made your story all the more appealing.

You did an awesome job. This is an instant favorite.

-Shannon
cvds chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Loved it!
AnnaCullen01 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
i liked it :)

it was pretty :)

Xoxo
FireRosePetal chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
OMGGGG! THIS IS THE CUTEST CONFESSION WAY I EVER READ! it's sooooooooo cuteee ahhh i wish i get asked out like that XDDD
loca37 chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
I remember this story from earlier this year.

I think it is adorable, but I would have probably enjoyed it a bit more if Bella had been a bit more likeable.

I liked the twist on Rose.

Thanks for sharing.
martdg chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Yup, still good. ;) Really like the idea of you adding a chapter or two, after Elemental of course. Granted, I always want more from you and your characters so that's not a big surprise.

I was always curious about when Edward started to realize he was an ass and screwed up a good relationship with Bella. Also, the events in his life that made him question what he values most. Not sure if one of those chapters would be EPOV, but I'm sure whatever you wrote would add to the story.

Thanks for posting, I always love your stories.
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