Reviews for Blood Play
pnkats chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
loved the chapter and the story
theunbestest chapter 2 . 8/13/2010

friggen amazing :')

update soon!
IkeaGoddess chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Bloody hell, Batman. When you mean dark, you mean dark. I love it. My favorite scene was the "You are testing my patience, Isabella"-closet scene. I loved the dominating Edward as her maker. I hope to see more of him.
gmteenz chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
Wow, fantastic, give me more.
HopeStreet chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
I'm not sure which version I like better because they both result in OH WOW reactions from me! What a good story!
Twi Reader1 chapter 1 . 8/7/2010

1)bella is a masochist...

2) scary... he will never let her go...

3) does he change her at the end or does he just bite her?/ wouldn't she change from him repeatedly biting her?

4) does everyone just think she is dead?

good story...
theunbestest chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
hi, i love this story :)

im not telling you to do this its just friendly advice i figured you should do it as after she goes unconsious she wakes up to find shes a vampire and then she meets all the others etc. they all miracleise (dont know if thats a word) at the fact that she didnt feel pain thrugh the transformation and edward confesses he saved her because he loves her and then she loves him blah blah blah etc.

oh yeh and a few lemons ofc :D
Motoko The Red Queen chapter 1 . 8/2/2010

Gosh, I love your story... for real.

Please update it

I'm dying to read more Darkward!

NorthwesternBaby chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
love it
asiula chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Hmmm... interesting... Gonna put it on alert :)
doves1993 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
This is good I hope you do decide to change this to a 3 part story:)
JulzIzMe chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Thanks to responding to my review of the contest version of the story. of course I'm going to like the longer version better. I'm looking forward to the other two parts of the story. Great job!
Think With Caution chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Um, so, if you could continue this with the 3-part short story idea, that would be awesome, lol. Or even if you wrote another darkward story, that would be great too. Either one would make my day :D
izzie dear chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I'm excited to have read such an excellent Darkward. I must admit that I like the one shots' ending better, but only because in the other one- Bella asks to be remembered. I'm just not a fan of needy Bella.

Regardless, for one's first time at writing lemon's you did a superb job. Also, I beg of you to write another Darkward fic. There are far too little of them on ff.

Thank you for such an involved story.
Rupert is King-I am Queen chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
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