Reviews for Alena and the Morph Machine
pikachucat chapter 15 . 2/4/2013
fractalman chapter 5 . 8/26/2011
"does it sing?"



"...idiot patrol"

it was all I could do to keep from falling off my chair.
Tanon chapter 15 . 5/23/2011
Very nice fic. Please update! The hologram thing was still a little confusing, but apart from that, a good read.

Multiversity chapter 15 . 3/29/2011
Why? Why,oh why...

WHY is there not more to this story? Curse you, cliffhanger!

Excellent. I approve.
Teraunce chapter 15 . 1/16/2011
nice story. 11/10. i hope it gets updated soon.
Lixie Lorn chapter 15 . 1/15/2011
...iiinteresting. Like the failed morphs touch.

Lixie Lorn chapter 14 . 12/20/2010
Wow. That's confusing. Poor Alena.

Lixie Lorn chapter 13 . 12/16/2010
...that's iiiinteresting.

~Felix Lorn of CRITIC, also known as General Everin Stormclaw of the Many Titles, High Priest of the Crazy Hand, Master of the Emerald Stars and Acolyte of the New Chu Order, Dragon Prince and the Sixth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy and the Moonrider, Commander of the Blood Talons and Seeker of Self, Queen of Alanjeh and the Last Hairlander, She Who Knows and Servant To That Which Waits, Senshi of the Many Moons and Sailor Elara, Scion of Bramimond, the **-Brand Messiah and He Who Lulz With Cats, The Kinetic Impact and the Red Fist, the Ninja Hippo and She Who Has Glee, Seer of Callan and Master of the Bishie Plane, Priestess of the Numberless Gods and Keeper of the EXY Borderline, Harbinger of the Unreal and Sorceress of the Unknown, Master of the Five Styles and Prophet of the Shipping Goddess, Dancer of the Wind and the Nurtured Flame of Life Through Death, Fangirl Among Fangirls and Defier of Birth and Nature, Walker of the Thousand Paths, Seeker of the Third Dawn and She Who Only Seeks Home, out
ultima-owner chapter 12 . 10/7/2010
So much ground to cover, so little time
Lixie Lorn chapter 12 . 10/7/2010
Fiiinally read it! Is interesting... and I still support NeoPikashipping. XD

A. Novol.

Alena's name starts with A.


ultima-owner chapter 11 . 9/29/2010
Watch out team thunder, it just got personal
ultima-owner chapter 10 . 9/15/2010
*nearly chokes*

Sparks is with them?

The haters had it comin'
Tyltalis chapter 9 . 9/10/2010
Yay! New reviewer!


That'd be me.

Anyway, I've been following your works for quite some time, including this one, and I am impressed. I love the storylines and originality of all of them. So...uhm...yeah. I'm envious of you eloquence and finesse as well...

So. I quite like Alena; she is easy to relate to. I love her pokemon's unique personalities as well, particularly Sander and Twig. Electrinz is nice too, but, come on. A hyper flygon and a coffee/bitter-food obsessed yet mature sceptile? 20 points for pwnage.

Good job.

Your new reviewer,

ultima-owner chapter 9 . 9/8/2010
A out of body expince
ultima-owner chapter 8 . 9/1/2010
There will always be haters for everything
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